My Ranking Points
EXPLAINING STUFF / GLOSSARY:
Zodian: The first founder of the zodiacs, said to have been a Capricorn and a god. His wife was Solare, said to have been a Virgo.
“Much an undeeded death,” hissed the queen. A boulder had come from Zodian knew where. “Stop in the murder of my soldiers, mere Tributes! For I am the daughter of Sepentine!”
“No…” croaked Sagittarius.
“Your soldiers striked first!” insisted Danaë, eyes bright.
“You trespassed!” rasped the Queen.
“DON’T ARGUE WITH YEJHIX!” said Sagittarius through gritted teeth.
Yejhix’s forked tongue flicked. “Go now, and go back, or die.”
“Some of us are doomed to die, and one is gone already,” growled Sagittarius, eyes smoldering. “But I will not sacrifice my friends for a woman who wishes to break the Rift from Earth!”
Yejhix darted forward and, before anyone could react, she bit Sagittarius in the eye.
The brave fire heroine fell. Taurus scrambled towards her, but it was late, far too late.
Sagittarius had breathed her last breaths.
Danaë was blinded by vegeance as she slowly and subtly twisted her arms. And so would Yejhix. She cut the air from the blood-red queen’s throat. The snake began to gargle… and choke… and her eyes went fully white… “mother! Help!”
Two major deaths..and many minor snake’s downfall too.
I am a killer.
Hey Smoothies, I would like to be un-tagged, because I don’t have enough time to read your work. I’m sure it’s amazing though, and keep going with your writing 🙂