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KARISSA BIO (note, the story is past the bio)
Name: Karissa (Amare), surname unknown, official title Queen Karissa/Amare of Wilderness Wood
Parents/Relatives/Lineage: A simple woodcutter was her father, he passed, a wild ****** huntress was her aunt, she passed. A fact about her not told in the myths is she is a demigoddess, daughter of Solare.
School: A graduate of Swan School. Her house was Taurus.
Personality: Caring, determined, proud, eager
Flaws: Proud, determined, she has 100% faith in all of her plans, and she doesn’t trust other peoples plans.
Karissa is beautiful. She has a small nose, a determined expression, curly auburn hair, muscular limbs, scars, light feet and slightly pointed ears.
Clothing/Wears: While she’s in Wilderness Wood, she wears a green silk dress and a flower crown. When she’s out doing things like shooting the stars to grant wishes for mortals, she wears a leather tunic, trousers and high boots.
Pet(s) (optional): Every animal in Wilderness Wood either owes their life to her, or someone in their family owes their life to her. Every animal in her queendom is her “pet”, so to speak
Weapon(s) (optional): A bow and arrow, a sword and her wolves
Backstory: READ MY CH FOR WHEN GEMINI TELLS DANAE THE STORY OF KARISSA! After that, she… died in a freak accident involving a failed marriage. Do not ask her about it. Her best friend, a wood nymph called Patience, was marrying an elf named Ragnar, when a deranged ogre called Chasm, who was in love with Patience, broke in and tried to grab Patience. Horrified, Karissa shot Chasm between the eyes, but shortly after the arrow hit his brain, Chasm slammed Karissa against a tree, killing her. Solare found her soul drifting through the stars, not a peace, and made her immortal, returning her to the mourning wildlife of Wilderness Wood.
Kk, writing time!
Wolves? How are wolves going to help us?! blurted Sagittarius,
speeding after Karissa.
“Have faith in me,” said Karissa bluntly. She howled wildly, and gazed at a hill. Seconds later, a massive pearl-grey wolf with ice-blue eyes appeared at the top of the hill. It howled in a response. Then it began running towards her, fifty wolves behind it. Their feet shook the ground. Just as Danae was sure the wolves was stampede, as she tensed her muscles to run, the wolves came to a stop. The pounding of their feet echoed away.
“Hey, Silk`pelt!” cooed Karissa, stroking the pearl-grey wolf. “Who’s a good girl?”
And how are wolves going to help us? said Sagittarius sceptically, brow raised.
(Note from author: I had never really planned how wolves are going to help…)
“Stampede, of course!” said Karissa, as if it was common knowledge. “Sneak up when they’re asleep, kidnap Taurus and force her to accept Danae bac–”
The sky rumbled. A massive boulder came out of the ground, with the face of a woman.
Karissa! a light, motherly voice scolded. Don’t say that! WOLVES! Stick to your plan!
“Fine, mum,” said Karissa, rolling her eyes and watching the boulder recede into the earth.
“That was…,” said Danae with a dry voice.
“Solare, yes,” said Karissa, turning to Danae. “Wife of Zodian. Speaker and write of prophecies. My mother.”
She stabbed her sword into the soft earth.
“Not that I like her.”
Rain began to fall.
NOTE: I’m losing the thread for the story. Need some plotline ideas. I’ll give you a choice.
1) Loves rules all
2) Friendship rules all
3) Teamwork rules all
4) Determination rules all
PICK ONE! Majority will decide.
Personally, I think “love rules all” would work best. What do you think
Woah! This is AMAZING! I’m really intrigued! I’ll be sure to check out the prev. chapters. I think friendship rules all will work too! love rules all will fit it more though!
Love rules all. It seems like that will grant it a more interesting storyline. The rest are kind of abstract or they wouldn’t make sensible themes.