cuteypie1mint posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 8 months ago

    Thank you all for the comments on my last post. I swear this question will be easier.
    Catch Up: @cuteypie1mint
    Chapter 53
    Liv’s P.O.V.
    ——————————————-
    β€œI’m worried about Angel.” Lana said, a frown crossing her face. It was hard to blame her; Angel WAS her sister. But honestly, it had only be a half an hour. I bli…[Read more]

        kiko55 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Awesome chapter!! Love it!! I am a mix between Ravenclaw and Gryffindor, SO Gryffinclaw. If I could only be one, I would probably be Ravenclaw. πŸ˜‰

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Thank you @kiko55 – I am a Gryffinclaw too (I got Gryffindor when I took the quiz the first time, but on the second time I got Ravenclaw. I feel more drawn to Ravenclaw too, lol. But what I was actually asking was what house would you put the characters in. But honestly, it’s fine!

          kiko55 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          @cuteypie1mint, oh probably Liv is Gryffindor, Lana Gryffindor, Angel probably Ravenclaw or Gryffindor, Paige Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff, Jessica Slytherin, Lucy Slytherin, Elanos maybe Ravenclaw, George?, Nolan Hufflepuff maybe. πŸ˜‰

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Amazing chapter! πŸ™‚

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        I only know one for sure and that would be Hannah in Slytherin…

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Great job BTW

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Great chapter! Alright let’s see… I’d put Liv in Gryffindor, as well as Lana and Angel, Hannah in Slytherin, Nolan and Elanos might go in Hufflepuff, Lucy in Gryffindor, Paige in Ravenclaw, and Jessica in Slytherin. I might be missing someone.

        neverafter12 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Amazing chapter!! Love it!! As for houses I agree with @fairytalegirl123 πŸ™‚

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Good job! Also, Gryffindor for Lana, Angel and Paige. Idk who Hannah is lol. Lucy in Slytherin as well as George and Jessica. Nolan in Ravenclaw and Elanos in Hufflepuff. .

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Thank you all so, so much for the comments. It honestly means a lot. You all have such interesting and varied views on the characters; you guys are really awesome!

        polabear11 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Nolan and Paige in Ravenclaw, Liv, Lana, and George in Gryffindor, Jayden, Elanos, and Angel in Hufflepuff, and Hannah, Derek, and Payton in Slytherin. Amazing chapter

          wenteo replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Amazing chapter! And also my answer is same with @polabear11

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Here are my opinions…
        Gryffindor: Lana, George, Liv, Angel (she was a Hatstall – it took a long time to decide between Ravenclaw and Gryffindor)
        Ravenclaw: Elanos, Paige
        Hufflepuff: Lucy, Nolan
        Slytherin: Jessica, Hannah

        dot111 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Great chapter!! πŸ™‚
        I think that Liv and Lana would probably be in Gryffindor, Hannah, Jessica and Lucy in Slytherin, Paige, Angel and possibly Nolan in Ravenclaw, and Elanos in Hufflepuff.

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Hey, @smartcleverbunny560, @dot111, @caramelprincess, @fairytalrgirl123, and @sophieagatha20145 – though you didn’t comment on this post, a new chapter is up.

          sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks! That was an amazing chapter as usual. I just want to put this out here (because I’m learning it in wiritng). When you’re writing dialogue, it would look like this:
          “Blah blah blah,” so-and-so said.
          “BLauh blah bluh!” so-and-so yelled. Then you would continue with the story until someone else says something. That’s when you would put their…[Read more]

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        I dont mean to be offensive, but I have a degree in literature. I am pretty sure that my writing and dialogue is correct. Thanks!

          neverafter12 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          If you have a degree, doesn’t that mean your 16? Also Cool! @cuteypie1mint

          sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Oh, sorry! I didn’t mean to offend you. In my Language Arts class, we were learning about it so I decided to put it up here. I’m so sorry and if you want to, you can ignore my comments.

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        No it doesn’t mean she’s 16 lol.

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 7 months ago

        No, I’m younger, but I got into this Honours program. Also, @sophieagatha20145, its fine. I probably overreacted too, sorry.

    aelintiya posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 8 months ago

    Hey guys, I realized that I made a mistake in Lysandra and Blair’s bios. @sophieagatha20145 thank you so much for the heads up.
    Here is Blair’s flaw (s)
    Flaw(s): Blair has 2, long, wide scars on her bare back.
    Now for Lysandra’s:
    Flaw(s) : Lysandra has a mark on her ears, a bite mark.

    What? You think I would just correct my mistakes without a…[Read more]

        fallcolours77 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Wow! Amazing! That cliffhanger in the end just leaves me wanting MOREEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Will you tag me? I love it πŸ™‚

          aelintiya replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Sure!

          aelintiya replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks!

        maidengirl replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Awesome! This is such as great story. If you’re looking for constructive criticism, the only thing I have to say is that it was a little fast paced and some details were missing, so you can fix that next time, maybe? Otherwise, it’s a really creative start. Very original. I actually had planned a similar story at first, but decided to write it…[Read more]

          aelintiya replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks for the heads up, and sure, I will be writing now.

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        That was amazing!! You’re welcome for the help……I’m sorry that I’m not very active on this website, and I’ll give you more tips if I think you need them!

    luna101 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    Catch up @luna101

    A Tale of Frenemies: Chapter 54

    Ariana sat on the dungeon floor, looking for a way out of her cell. β€œIt’s no use, these bars are crafted by elves. That means it’s magically indestructible. And you can’t unlock your cell, or mine, because the key’s in Evaline’s pocket,” Jacob said, shaking his head.
    β€œHow do you know about elf…[Read more]

        reaperthecat290 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        very good job! and i sensed the familiarity

          fsa161 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          So so so so GOOD! LOVE IT!

        icey4605 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        I was like, “It’s a Howler…”

        But seriously, good job!

        espilce replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Good job

        dot111 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Great chapter, good job.

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Ahh yes I noticed that. Good job. πŸ™‚

        fantasygirl12 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        ! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ :):)

          kiko55 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          AMAZING!!!!!!

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        I loved the letter lol and good job!

        wenteo replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Nice!

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        I love how you put subtle Harry Potter things in your amazing stories!!!

    luna101 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    Catch up @luna101

    A Tale of Frenemies: Chapter 53

    Evaline reluctantly put the black-swan ring on the floor. Once it was off her finger, Evaline felt like a weight has been lifted off her shoulders. But then, she felt something cold brush her finger again. Evaline looked up and saw Rafal smirk at her as Maleficient’s staff started to quiver. T…[Read more]

        icey4605 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        This is really good!

        espilce replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome

        fantasygirl12 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        awesome thanks for tagging me!

          theamazingarys replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Can’t wait for the next one!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Great job!

        dot111 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome chapter!

          kiko55 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Really good chapter πŸ˜‰

        laura22 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Amazing chapter!

        wenteo replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Amazing!

        reaperthecat290 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        AWESOME!

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Amazing!!!!!!!!!!

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        How the flippin heck are you not a published author yet?? *is dumbfounded* You’re so good!!

    luna101 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Catch up @luna101

    A Tale of Frenemies: Chapter 43

    Evaline rummaged through her trunk, looking for the magic mirror that her mum had given her before the Evil Queen died. Behind Evaline, Rafal pointed his white hot finger at Maria, Delilah, Serafina and Semone. β€œFound it!” Evaline cried, holding up an ornate gold hand mirror with some jewels mis…[Read more]

        luna101 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Sorry, @caramelprincess and @esmeralda122, I misspelt your usernames.

          spitzenvelder replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          thanks for tagging me, good chapter btw

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Lovely chapter!

          kiko55 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Awesome chapter πŸ˜‰

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome chapter, great job! πŸ™‚

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Great chapter.

        wenteo replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

        catofthewoods replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        LOVE IT!!

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Nice!!

    ninja002 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Sorry I haven’t written in so long. I’m just having trouble thinking of what to write! I don’t really know where to go with my story. πŸ™

        ninja002 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        can anyone help? You can see what I’ve done so far at @Ninja002

        ninja002 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        also, if Cameron seems like he acts a little like a girl… That’s cuz I don’t have any boys in my family to know what they act like daily

          ninja002 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          well… I have my dad

        ninja002 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        no ones gonna help? Please? πŸ™

          twistar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          what part of the story are you I can see what I can say

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I’m so sorry, I can’t help. I have writer’s block myself.

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Okay, so maybe you can have Caremon’s POV and it’s the next day or at Forest Groups and something with Millicent happens with detail, please! Sorry for posting on all of your chapters, I needed to read them so I wouldn’t say something weird like “Have the Storian kill the character”, etc. Also, I thought you would want the feedback!

    luna101 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Catch up @luna101

    Chapter 40

    Ariana looked at the board with all the Evers’ rankings. It said:

    5. Bellatrix 768 points

    4. Caroline 790 points

    3. Sabrina 842 points

    2. Jacob 896 points

    1. Ariana 901 points

    Ariana watched the bottom of the board, refusing to believe that she was Class Captain. Beside her, Bellatrix stood scowling and…[Read more]

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I loved it! Great job. πŸ™‚

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Lovely chapter, good job.

        fairytaleendings replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Wow, that was great! Would you mind tagging me as well?

        wenteo replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Nice!

          kiko55 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Wonderful πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome chapter!

          twistar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          I agree awesome

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

    soulreaper posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    [for previous parts, click on the smiley πŸ™‚]
    I’M ALIVE!
    Sorry for not updating in like more than a month? Was really busy preparing for my wedding with Aric* (this December *winks*)
    *thesis defense, so don’t mind me.
    So yeah :> Uncle Kas is here again.
    Taglist: *do tell me if I missed anyone* @arian2 @artemisetoile @luna101 @puyre98 @caramelprinces…[Read more]

        elivrawoods replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        IMG AMAZING!!! Btw am I invited to your wedding?

        icey4605 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        JAV JAV JAV JAVERT

        *squeals turn to shrieks as I keep reading*

        *pauses*

        EEEAAAAHHHH THIS IS WONDERFUL KAASSS

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        JAV JAV JAV JAVERT
        That was an amazing chapter! That was really really really good! Ok, I’m sorry, but that was really fabulous!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Jav Jav Jav Javert!!
        This is amazing!!! Super nice job!!

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Jav Jav Jav JAVERT
        Magnificent job Kas! Also it’s great to see you. πŸ™‚

          hesterofroom66 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Jav Jav Jav Javert!
          Why does my autocorrect keeps on making it java so that I have to change it manually?!?
          But beautiful! I’m glad you’re back!

        boomboompancakes replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        JAV JAV JAVERT
        *stands still with mouth hanging open*
        *doesn’t even blink*
        *doesn’t budge even when hand in waved in front of face*

        wenteo replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        JAV JAV JAV JAVERT!
        An amazing chapter, well done!

        luna101 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        JAV JAV JAV JAVERT!!! Fantastic!

        puyre98 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Thanks for tagging me, and did you say it was SHORT, because it’s no were near short, it’s also AWSOME!!!

          puyre98 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          P.s. JAV JAV JAVERT!!

        arian2 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Jav Jave Javert.
        Terrific.
        Or should I say…
        It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrificIt was terrific. It was terrific. It was terrific. It was t…[Read more]

          boomboompancakes replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          OKAY. WE GET IT ALREADY.

        flaw replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        JAV JAV JAV JAVERT
        This was an amazing chapter Kas! I don’t know why but I’m loving **** Mist right now XD

        heilnofheltia replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        JAV JAV JAVERT
        OMG. Kas, this rules!

        artemisetoile replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        JAV JAV JAV JAVERT
        okay okay so i know i’ve been gone 8 months but this was so good??? thank you so much for still writing in artemis. amazing chapter!

          artemisetoile replied 3 years, 9 months ago

          ((also i realized you made it gay thank u. representation on here is so rare))

    spitzenvelder posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Okay so re-try on the chapter, I took all your critic into account and I am ready to try again!!!!!!
    Chapter 1 School of good and evil
    Sorel hugged her mom for the 50th time, her mom didn’t want her to leave, ” remember,” she said ” if ever feel tired or lonley or over worked you can always write to us and we’ll send our advice, Sorel…[Read more]

        spitzenvelder replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Oh sorry, my Title is
        How to survive school of good 101
        (maybe I should make one about how to survive school of evil 101

          spitzenvelder replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          πŸ˜‰

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Cool chapter. Next time you might want to start a new line for each speaker. It makes it clearer for the reader to understand, but either way, it was great πŸ™‚

          spitzenvelder replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Okay cool

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Just a few spelling mistakes but this was better nice job!

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Nice! More detail, please next time. My characters eyes are turquoise like yours!! How cool! (except my characters eyes change color, but normally turquoise.) πŸ™‚

        luna101 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Great chapter!

    duck posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    This is chapter 7 of my story about Calista. You can read the rest of the stories @duck, if you’d like to.
    I hope you enjoy the new chapter…
    Chapter 7
    “You broke into the Evil castle, managed to incite a near-riot in the Evil corridors and ATE about half a classroom.” Dovey seethed. “Do you have any idea what you’ve done?”
    Calista stayed…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Lovely chapter, good job. πŸ™‚

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Wonderful, nicely done! πŸ™‚

        sophieagatha20145 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I CAN”T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

        wenteo replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Amazing chapter, well done

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Well written. πŸ™‚

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