Hey. This is my character bio. Hope you like it! Critique is appreciated. The harsher the better, as I really want to improve.
Name: Antoinette Summercross
Birthday: October 28th
Era: After The Tale of Sophie and Agatha
Siblings/Family: Aubade Summercross (Father), Soleil Summercross (Mother), Abernathy…[Read more]
Antoinette is kind of a Mary Sue. She has the potential to be and do, like, literally ANYTHING she wants. She’s pretty overpowered in a lot of different categories. Could you give her some flaws? Such as, having an “ideal Evergirl” appearance to everyone else, but being really insecure and having to spend a long time every day to maintain it. Or…[Read more]