spaceunicorn posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 1 year, 6 months ago

    Hey. This is my character bio. Hope you like it! Critique is appreciated. The harsher the better, as I really want to improve.

    Name: Antoinette Summercross
    Age: 13
    Birthday: October 28th
    Gender: Female
    School: Good
    Era: After The Tale of Sophie and Agatha
    Siblings/Family: Aubade Summercross (Father), Soleil Summercross (Mother), Abernathy…[Read more]

        ivypool2005 replied 1 year, 6 months ago

        Antoinette is kind of a Mary Sue. She has the potential to be and do, like, literally ANYTHING she wants. She’s pretty overpowered in a lot of different categories. Could you give her some flaws? Such as, having an “ideal Evergirl” appearance to everyone else, but being really insecure and having to spend a long time every day to maintain it. Or…[Read more]