sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 11 months ago

    Hello peoples of Level One! I’m back for my first chapter! See you when it ends!

    Break the Surface (used to be Enchanted Falls. I’m playing with names)
    Chapter 1
    By SparklyFairy123
    POV – Allyndra
    The cliff was beckoning me. Begging me to go to the rocky edge and climb down. But I just couldn’t. I wasn’t afraid of heights, well, not really at leas…[Read more]

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Great job! Maybe a little more showing instead of telling would be good, but I think that the style works well with the character 🙂 was

          nightshade11 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          *ignore “was”

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Wow! Great. Interested to see what happens next!

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Aww… this is soooo good that I don’t think we could put you in our hostages cage. Remember, we’re watching you. Now, off to torture some hostages… 😉

          gwen99 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          just out of curiosity LEGENDARYEVILBANDIT what is with all the hostage cages?

          sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          It’s her little joke. In my first bio here, I said (partially joking) I was nervous that everyone would be super critical and scary (NOT TRUE), so she joked that she had a cage of hostages… she can be kooky sometimes. 😉

        happyduck replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        This is a nice chapter! I agree with @nightshade11

        aricaofthewoodsbeyond replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        OUAT!!!! 🙂 Nice chapter, though I do agree more showing less telling would do you some good, just a suggestion.;)

        t-q-yun replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Amazing chapter!!! And yes, I agree with @aricaofthewoodsbeyond .

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        I am a little kooky. @sparklyfairy123 speaks out of expierience (I’m sure I spelled that wrong)

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Amazing!!

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 11 months ago

    Hi again Readers of Level 0! I’m back with another chapter of the Mermaid’s Crown. And yay me! I’m only one day late this time! If you don’t know, I try to post a chapter of each RP every week, so… yeah. Hmm, let’s see what happened last week… *scrolls up on Google Doc*… … … Ah yes. Their lives were just starting to fall apart. RESUME!

    T…[Read more]

        demonicever replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Great chapter as always! (PS you should probably switch between bios with Margie and Lydia)

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 11 months ago

    Hello people! I was umm… I uhh, started this five days ago… I was supposed to post it four days ago, but I went to see Thor: Ragnarok, then Nightfall came out, and there’s the matter of school, and homework, and watching Thor: Ragnarok again… yeah. This is my first bio on Level 1, so let’s see if I can shake my not-so-great start and write a g…[Read more]

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Amazing! Don’t worry! We Level 1 people definitely don’t have a huge caves full of captives… whoops, just gave everything away.

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Cool! Out of curiosity, is there a specific reason why her eyes change color like that?

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        If that was your idea of a terrible bio, then I’m clearly a terrible writer, because that is ten times better than all my bios COMBINED!
        Do not doubt yourself!!! 😀

        sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Thanks everyone! @nightshade11 yes there is but it’s a secret. 🙂

        happyduck replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        This is an amazing bio! I look forward to the story because I said I liked 3 the most in your post. Great job!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome! I can’t wait for your story!
        (If anything, Level 1 writers will be TOO nice and not give you negative feedback!)

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 11 months ago

    So, I got a few answers in the open chat, but I would like a few more so that I don’t have to pester my friends who know nothing about SGE, and this is most definitely NOT a one-liner. So here we are. I have a few ideas for another RP, and I don’t know what to choose. Hey, why not let the people who might read it decide?! So here we are. Ple…[Read more]

        doveys-apprentice replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        second (im a Land of Stories fan) or third. what about The Surface as the title? (if you still need ideas, you don’t have to use it though 😉 ) 0 or 1 either way.

          doveys-apprentice replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          and maybe Snatched as a title of choice 2? or The Gap?

        korallkatt replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        The FABRIC OF THE WORLDS FOR CHOICE 2! choice 2!!

        toffee replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        One

        sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Ok. Three won

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 11 months ago

    Search all around
    for the Mermaid’s Crown,
    only then will you find the proof.
    Search high and low, but stay close to home,
    if you want to find unknown truth.
    Most important of all, stay true to your sound,
    or all will be lost, and nothing found.

    Hi again and welcome back! If you missed the last chapter, there’s the riddley poem thing, but I wou…[Read more]

        sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Oh, and sorry if we’re not allowed to talk about other books here, but I apologize if some of the magic and mermaid stuff is a little bit like the Waterfire Saga

          sofiaaliz replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          have you read the waterfire saga ?

          sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Yup. All of them. You?

          sofiaaliz replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          yep whats your favourite book, I love all of them

          sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Probably Seaspell or… yeah, I just love all of them

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group Book 4: QUESTS FOR GLORY 2 years, 12 months ago

    So, I finished QFG a while ago, but I can’t get over the ending, and I have two questions. Was anyone else talking/yelling at their book when they finished it? No? Just me? Well I saw it coming, and I was having a sleepover with my new student friend, so she didn’t get it, and I was going crazy. Also, who else is getting their friends SGE boo…[Read more]

        kirby212 replied 2 years, 12 months ago

        Don’t feel bad. I’m still yelling at my book since I finished it like a month ago. Also, I’ve been trying to convince my friends to read SGE for the longest time, but they’re just like sure whatever. It drives me CRAZY that I can’t talk to anyone about SGE!!

        uraza169 replied 2 years, 12 months ago

        I didn’t talk to the book, but at times I wanted to yell at the characters (*cough, cough* Tedros, *cough, cough). Sadly, I have only one friend who’s read SGE. And only the first book! Another friend tried to read it, and then said that she didn’t really like it.

        phoenixfeather102 replied 2 years, 12 months ago

        I was yelling and talking to my book all the way through as I was reading it. My friends all thought I was crazy.

        gracegranger replied 2 years, 12 months ago

        Me too

          oddjina replied 2 years, 12 months ago

          After I read the last part, I was like:

          WHAT THE HECK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

        theginger replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Ha, not for this book but for Keeper of the Lost Cities: Lodestar, I threw the book across the room when I read the cliffhanger.

          sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          OMG! Sorry, this has nothing to do with SGE, but @theginger you read Keeper too?! Because next to SGE and a few other things, they are my favorite books (once again NEXT TO SGE)

          theginger replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Ya @sparklyfairy123! I’m a Keeper!!!!! They are my absolute favorite books ever! SGE is second.

        uraza169 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        WHAT??? I LOVE KotLC!!!! Are you excited for Nightfall?

          sparklyfairy123 replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          OMG YES! @uraza169 I preordered it and it comes tomorrow!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 !!!!!! SOOOOO excited!!! I’m gonna take Nightfall, QFG, the handbook/Last Ever After, if I can find it (someone hid it deep in my basement), Lodestar, A World Without Princes, and Neverseen out into the woods and do a book stack nature picture with all of them. Team…[Read more]

          theginger replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Yes! I’m 100% Team Foster-Keefe!!! Tam and Sophie just don’t work….neither do Dex and Sophie cause u know they are sort of related…….and Just I can’t even tolerate Sophitz…….

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years ago

    Okay, so, I know that it’s not as bad as last time, but I still haven’t posted in about 3.5 weeks. I’m super sorry, but in my defense, I’ve been busy with school and a vacation for my cousin’s wedding, where there was either little or no wifi. Anyways please enjoy! Please let me know if you want to be tagged, and any constructive criticism is app…[Read more]

        sparklyfairy123 replied 3 years ago

        GAH SO SORRY! @celloluvr

          doveys-apprentice replied 3 years ago

          i loved it! thnx 4 tagging me, i need more 😉

        demonicever replied 3 years ago

        That was really good! Please keep tagging me!

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group Book 4: QUESTS FOR GLORY 3 years ago

    soman you are definitely a never. you have crushed so many hopes and dreams. i knew he was the snake. I KNEW IT FROM HIS FIRST HEART TO HEART WITH TEDROS. GAH CLIFFHANGERS! it’s a love/hate relationship. And there goes another gloriously wierd jumble of words, courtesy of me.

        kimberleylam156gmail-com replied 3 years ago

        He did get 75% never in the entrance exam

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years ago

    Here is a bio for Lydia. She is a mostly secret character, so there are some secrets hidden. If you would like me to, I can repost this bio fully when all her secrets are revealed. I will try to post her first real chapter today or tomorrow, so yeah. If you want to see more of these characters then let me know and I’ll tag you.
    Name: Lydia D…[Read more]

        demonicever replied 3 years ago

        Wow, that’s great! Could you tag me for future chapters?

    sparklyfairy123 posted an update in the group Book 4: QUESTS FOR GLORY 3 years ago

    AHH for those of you that know what happens at the end of chapter 20, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!! I was up for like, 20 extra minutes squealing and being excited. I think Sophie secretly longs for this, I want it for her, and she deserves it. I also really like the fact that the Nevers aren’t really bad bad they’re bad good

        therealsophie2001 replied 3 years ago

        I agree. She deserves a love life

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