star123

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    star123 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 7 months ago

    (I FINALLY FOUND OUT WHAT TO TITLE THIS AS)
    A Good Witch or an evil Princess
    Tags: @RAYLAOFWOODSBEYOND
    @TAKE2007
    @MELODYJ
    @IMAREADERANDPROUDOFIT
    @THECOVEN4EVER
    @TOTALLYEVIL43
    Ch 8 part 1 The end….or unite
    Raven’s P.O.V
    I’m falling, this might be the end, the wind is at my back pushing me in every direction, why…WHY THE HECK DID I BELIEVE THAT GUY, I KNEW HE WAS EVIL, but I was too.
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    “Raven, raven a punch isn’t going to do anything,” a voice said, sweet but sinister. The orb began to bubble and sharpen and twist and then it threw Carlos against the wall. “Let me help you.” he said “Fine” I whispered, knowing that they’ll kill me no matter what “Now snap your fingers and I’ll shield you.” The voice instructed, I snapped and a thin dark shield surrounded me and Scarlet, how did he know she was there? “I can sense your friends and enemies.” he replied, but another question came to mind. “What about Carlos.” There was nothing, no reply “Well” I asked impatiently not wanting to wait longer. A gold blast hit the shield smashing it to pieces. I felt a force slowly pulling me back but it wasn’t the gold blast I looked behind me and saw a boy wearing ripped cloth black jeans, a black shirt, and a snakeskin demie jacket, though I couldn’t see his face. “Hey!” I screeched. I looked down and realized I was outside, dangling 50 stories high the little house, and the hight made me want to puke. I suddenly felt myself being raised by the collar of my dress and saw him, he had shining red eyes, messy brown hair, and a wickedly evil smile. “Now here are a few ground rules 1. Always be evil, no switching sides. Well, it seems like you have to do that anyway since you don’t want to lose your friends or family.” He chuckled, as tears start to fill my eyes. I saw Tedros’s and Agatha’s face turn white at what they were seeing. I felt something creep around my neck and started to choke me. “Well, I say the rest later.” he said with a sweetly sick smile, and thew me down.

        take2007 replied 7 months ago

        Whoa, nice chapter 🙂

          star123 replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

          thanks

        star123 replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

        Hi everyone (oof) sorry for the delay of this chapter (tho u guys might have other things to do) and this shall be the strangest request but It feels really nice when you guys comment it gives me a lot of motivation to continue writing and advancing with the story

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