starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 1 year, 11 months ago

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    Hey everyone! I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry that I haven’t been on the site for so long! I got this new animation app and… Well… Idk what happened! Otherwise I don’t have any new POV’s or anything to talk about so I might need some catching up on some things. And…[Read more]

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 1 year, 11 months ago

    @nadea
    @pandagirl31
    @ivypool2005
    @hopepixie22
    Got a new POV finally. I think you will like this one 🙂

    Trail Eve:
    I am so nervous. I am somehow in rank number nine and I do not feel ready. And worse, I will be facing Peter and James and all those other girls I sort of knew. I am laying in bed and breathing hard. But today was the day. My secret…[Read more]

        starsshinebright replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Also, @nadea, could Peony save Sienna from something? I already have it planned out but I wanted to make sure you are okay with it.

          nadea replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Um, from what, exactly? Because Sienna is tied for top rank with Lola, so she would surely be able to defend herself.
          I mean, Sienna has spent months preparing for this, so… could I hear your idea first??

        nadea replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Oh, and VERY good job!! I really like it because Sienna also plays piano. (And because I play piano & love it so much!)

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          This is great!!! I love the piano part since Lola and I play the piano. Xd

        ivypool2005 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Just saying… it’s the TRIAL by Tale, not the TRAIL by Tale. Just saying. Also, tense changes again, and you had a couple of dangling participles, and remember that “he said” is usually not capitalized. I think that’s all.
        Good job on the story and heightening the Peter-Peony romance!

        starsshinebright replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        @nadea, this is what I was thinking: Someone (probably a boy) would sneak up on Sienna with sword(maybe) or about to do a spell and Peony stops him. Or something like that

          starsshinebright replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Also, in real life I play piano too! 🙂

          nadea replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Um… I’m not sure about the “Saving Sienna” plot point. Why would an Everboy want to kill Sienna? (Neverboys don’t have swords). It could be James, I guess.
          Oh, if this is trying to prove to Sienna that Peony wasn’t trying to hurt Lol with the pirates, I get that. But better mae it neverboy with Wish Fish or spells or something.
          And you can let…[Read more]

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Yeah, I guess that is probable. It’s not me to decide, really it is @nadea but I think that maybe it shouldn’t be a sword? Or maybe like make up some guy that really hates him, like ooh! Gaston’s son?

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          her, not him

        starsshinebright replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        @nadea, that does work. 🙂 ya. I guess it could happen like that

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 1 year, 12 months ago

    @nadea
    @pandagirl31
    @ivypool2005
    @hopepixie22
    Start trail top 10 list here (in the comments, for the school of evil. Good was already done)
    PS, Peony is in 9th and I guess James is in… Umm… What should James be in?

        nadea replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        Okay, I guess this will work. It’s just characters I made or were there in the story already.
        1.) Monica Sholz. (Remember her, @pandagirl31 XD)
        2.) Marazene Leecook
        3.) Phar Kirt
        4.) James
        5.) Leert Serx
        6.) Mahagy Jurt
        7.) Irta Berry
        8.) Riter Moss
        9.) Peony
        10.) Liraryz Belzasd

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 12 months ago

          Okay, that works. xd, yes i remember monika scholz.. Lol, she was originally a character I was using for a world war II story about a ***** daughter. LOL. 😉

          nadea replied 1 year, 12 months ago

          Is ***** supposed to be ******?

          nadea replied 1 year, 12 months ago

          Or *****? Or what is it supposed to be?

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Umm ******* political party

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Adolf’s

          ivypool2005 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          So would that be fascist?
          (I realize this isn’t helping, but if this doesn’t censor then I know it’s not that. Also, if this does censor, I need to have a little chat with Soman about freedom of speech.)

          ivypool2005 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Hmm… **** doesn’t fit though…
          (Again, trying things. Again, I’m sorry.)

          ivypool2005 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Oh, found it. Well. Personally, I don’t think that should be censored, but I’ll fight that fight another day.

        starsshinebright replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        I like the list 🙂

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Yeah, idk. Whatever. Sometimes the censoring goes a bit too far.

        nadea replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        I think @pandagirl‘s character was a ***** daughter. That has censored before, so it’s basically the army Adolf led.

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 1 year, 12 months ago

    @nadea
    @pandagirl31
    @hopepixie22
    @ivypool2005
    Here’s the new POV! Enjoy!
    The school for good has really changed me. Suddenly I do this every morning:
    1. Get up and wash hair (I stole shampoo from the groom room)
    2. Dry hair
    3. Go to mirror in my room and put on a little foundation to make me pale
    4. Get black eye shadow and only put a little on…[Read more]

        starsshinebright replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        PS, this goes from past tense to present.

        nadea replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        I really, really like this!! I’m going to work on a POV again!! For the Trial by Tale, I kind of think that everyone should write a POV for their own character and decided whether or not to eliminate their own character. I think that would work the best, because people may have other plans. I don’t really want others to POV for my character,…[Read more]

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 12 months ago

          Yes, this way would definitely work. I am going to start with Lola’s Trial Eve POV. You guys can follow suit I suppose. (??)

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 1 year, 12 months ago

    @nadea
    @ivypool2005
    @pandagirl31
    @hopepixie22
    Okay, I NEED to know: Is anyone gonna do a POV? I don’t have any ideas right now so does anyone got anything? I could write a quick POV but I would need an idea first.
    That was all, if we are all taking a break that is fine with me. I just wanted to know.
    Hope you people are enjoy life! XP

        ivypool2005 replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        I’m kind of in the same position as you. I don’t really know what to do… the next chapter could just be finding out the lineups for the Trial by Tale?

        nadea replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        I will post a POV tomorrow. I have actually 2. One is just what happened and how the pirates were sorted out. The other is fonding the lineups and some girl drama. Don’t worry. Liam, Lola, and Skylar are in the Good top 10. Sienna is too. Peony has disappeared from the rankings, but is presumably on the Evil Top 10.

        pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        I have some writer’s block. I am working on one now, though.

        I will probably post later this week- I have my friend’s basketball game to go to, and a hard math test tomorrow on algebra, and I need to get a 100 to keep my straight A’s for the trimester. (I have a 94%)

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years ago

    Members:
    @nadea
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    @pandagirl31
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    Got a new POV! Enjoy! (Sorry about it being short!)

    When I got back to the school for evil, I instantly became a celebrity. People started figuring out that I escaped evil and posed as good for a while and nobody knew. And that was just the beginning. Everyone, and I…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years ago

        COool!! I’m working on a new POV too!! This is great! BUt I really like Peter-Peony. 🙁

        ivypool2005 replied 2 years ago

        What school does Peony attend? I know she’s morally ambiguous, but she still has to go to one or the other.

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Peony was sent back to evil after the pirates were arrested.

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        @nadea, the Peony-Peter thing is not gone forever, you just have to wait and see…:)

          pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 12 months ago

          Ooh! #plottwist

        pandagirl31 replied 1 year, 12 months ago

        This is great!! I love it! ❤️ 🙂

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Awesome!!

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years ago

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    I felt like this POV was very needed

    I wake up on the floor. Where am I? I look around. I am somewhere dark. Freaking out I get up. Then I notice bars. Dungeon bars. I run over to them and start banging on them.
    “Hello? Is anyone there?” I scream. I call out…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years ago

        Um…. That was good. However, Sienna only says there was something suspicious about Peony AFTER everyone is out of the Room and the pirates are frozen. And Sienna can only do magic because of her talent, I don’t think anyone is Unlocked yet. But maybe that’s Peony’s talent….

        rophie replied 2 years ago

        Hi guys, um sorry for the notice but, can I not be tagged anymore? It’s not your story, but I just don’t have time to read any anymore. But please continue!

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Oh. Oops, I will remember that for the next POV @nadea
        But thanks for telling me anyway! 🙂

        pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

        This is great!! Yeah, nobody’s unlocked, but Sienna has her talent and Lola has water and animal powers. 🙂

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          Well. Like I said in Sienna’s bio, she can control water and ice. It’s a power she has, but not necessarily her only talent.

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Peony also has a talent, just I don’t think anyone knows it yet 😉

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Amazing!!

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years ago

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    @nadea
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    @rophie
    I know this is short, but I had nothing but this in my mind!

    Everything is my fault. Liam all beat up is my fault. My mother and my friends at home are at risk and it is pretty much my fault. The thing with Lola and her dad is probably my fault too. And Sienna…[Read more]

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Also, this is where I left off on last time. In the lunch room with everyone in it.
        Also, @nadea, if you POV anything about what I just wrote, you will have to make it in the past. I forgot you did what happened next to Liam, Lola, and Sienna after lunch.
        Sorry!

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          Okay. That’s fine. It’s okay that it was short, there was a lot of important info in this chapter. Keep up the good work!

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          Oh. How old is Peony? Sorry, I just want to know because her bio said CLASSIFIED.

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Okay, thanks! 🙂

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Oh. Umm. I forgot it said classified. One sec, I have to think

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        She is 13, but almost 14
        Her b-day will come up in a POV. I promise.

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Wait, how old is everyone in the group (as in characters. Not how old you actually are)

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          Well, Sienna is the youngest at Good at 11. Lola is 14. Liam is 13. Skylar is 13. Peony is 13.

          pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

          When is everybody’s character’s birthday’s? Lola’s is November 11th sooo… ooh that’s the first day of school. So she’s barely 14 then…

        pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

        No, wait it’s the 22nd. Never mind. But still, this story is taking place at like end of November/beginning of December.. huh

          pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

          Oh btw, I’m working on a POV.

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          Sienna is 11 and her birthday is June 10th 2006 so she will be 12 in June. I always thought Lola was 14 and would be 15 next year. Hm.. You can change her age if you want. I think most of the people are around ages 12-14.

          pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

          Lola will be 15 next year, but shortly after the school year starts.

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years ago

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    @nadea
    @ivypool2005
    @pandagirl31
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    @rophie

    New POV! Has a very important thing at the end we all forgot about.

    I have been really scared lately, those pirate guys are everywhere. I am walking to my room when I met up with Lola and her friends.
    “Oh, hi Peony. Are you okay?” She asked.
    I jumped whe…[Read more]

        ivypool2005 replied 2 years ago

        Where is everyone right now? Lola’s in Foxwood with Marie, and everyone else is in Good?

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          I think everyone is in Good right now.

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        I guess so…

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Read the new POV

        pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

        This is great! 🙂

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

    starsshinebright posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years ago

    @nadea
    @ivypool2005
    @pandagirl31
    @hopepixie22
    Alright, I know I got another one, but I had so many ideas get in my head this week!

    The bathroom thing was not pleasant. And the worse part is, they are watching me. Always watching me. I was walking back and won of them poses as an Everboy I bumped into my first day here. That is apparently how…[Read more]

        starsshinebright replied 2 years ago

        Sorry about it being short!

        nadea replied 2 years ago

        It is fine!! Great job! Wow there’s a lot going on!

        ivypool2005 replied 2 years ago

        Good job! I’d just like to remind you to check for tense changes in your writing. Also, a question. How dark are y’all willing to make this? I have some ideas, but they could potentially be too grave.

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          Well what are your ideas? I’m willing to have someone die, but I don’t really want it to be Lola or her dad. I am dedinitely POVing right away. Probably gonna post in a couple hours, but I won’t include deaths yet.

          ivypool2005 replied 2 years ago

          Just… torture? In general?

          nadea replied 2 years ago

          @ivypool2005
          Um, what types of torture? (*Nervous laugh*)

          pandagirl31 replied 2 years ago

          I’m okay with torture and probably magical deaths. I really don’t care.

        impossiblegirl replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        I love it!! Really good descriptions!

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