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Hey everyone! I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry that I haven’t been on the site for so long! I got this new animation app and… Well… Idk what happened! Otherwise I don’t have any new POV’s or anything to talk about so I might need some catching up on some things. And…[Read more]
I am so nervous. I am somehow in rank number nine and I do not feel ready. And worse, I will be facing Peter and James and all those other girls I sort of knew. I am laying in bed and breathing hard. But today was the day. My secret…[Read more]
Also, @nadea, could Peony save Sienna from something? I already have it planned out but I wanted to make sure you are okay with it.
Oh, and VERY good job!! I really like it because Sienna also plays piano. (And because I play piano & love it so much!)
Just saying… it’s the TRIAL by Tale, not the TRAIL by Tale. Just saying. Also, tense changes again, and you had a couple of dangling participles, and remember that “he said” is usually not capitalized. I think that’s all.
Good job on the story and heightening the Peter-Peony romance!
@nadea, this is what I was thinking: Someone (probably a boy) would sneak up on Sienna with sword(maybe) or about to do a spell and Peony stops him. Or something like that
Um… I’m not sure about the “Saving Sienna” plot point. Why would an Everboy want to kill Sienna? (Neverboys don’t have swords). It could be James, I guess.
Oh, if this is trying to prove to Sienna that Peony wasn’t trying to hurt Lol with the pirates, I get that. But better mae it neverboy with Wish Fish or spells or something.
And you can let…[Read more]
Yeah, I guess that is probable. It’s not me to decide, really it is @nadea but I think that maybe it shouldn’t be a sword? Or maybe like make up some guy that really hates him, like ooh! Gaston’s son?
@nadea, that does work. 🙂 ya. I guess it could happen like that
Okay, I guess this will work. It’s just characters I made or were there in the story already.
1.) Monica Sholz. (Remember her, @pandagirl31 XD)
2.) Marazene Leecook
3.) Phar Kirt
5.) Leert Serx
6.) Mahagy Jurt
7.) Irta Berry
8.) Riter Moss
10.) Liraryz Belzasd
Okay, that works. xd, yes i remember monika scholz.. Lol, she was originally a character I was using for a world war II story about a ***** daughter. LOL. 😉
So would that be fascist?
(I realize this isn’t helping, but if this doesn’t censor then I know it’s not that. Also, if this does censor, I need to have a little chat with Soman about freedom of speech.)
Hmm… **** doesn’t fit though…
(Again, trying things. Again, I’m sorry.)
Here’s the new POV! Enjoy!
The school for good has really changed me. Suddenly I do this every morning:
1. Get up and wash hair (I stole shampoo from the groom room)
2. Dry hair
3. Go to mirror in my room and put on a little foundation to make me pale
4. Get black eye shadow and only put a little on…[Read more]
I really, really like this!! I’m going to work on a POV again!! For the Trial by Tale, I kind of think that everyone should write a POV for their own character and decided whether or not to eliminate their own character. I think that would work the best, because people may have other plans. I don’t really want others to POV for my character,…[Read more]
Okay, I NEED to know: Is anyone gonna do a POV? I don’t have any ideas right now so does anyone got anything? I could write a quick POV but I would need an idea first.
That was all, if we are all taking a break that is fine with me. I just wanted to know.
Hope you people are enjoy life! XP
I’m kind of in the same position as you. I don’t really know what to do… the next chapter could just be finding out the lineups for the Trial by Tale?
I will post a POV tomorrow. I have actually 2. One is just what happened and how the pirates were sorted out. The other is fonding the lineups and some girl drama. Don’t worry. Liam, Lola, and Skylar are in the Good top 10. Sienna is too. Peony has disappeared from the rankings, but is presumably on the Evil Top 10.
I have some writer’s block. I am working on one now, though.
I will probably post later this week- I have my friend’s basketball game to go to, and a hard math test tomorrow on algebra, and I need to get a 100 to keep my straight A’s for the trimester. (I have a 94%)
When I got back to the school for evil, I instantly became a celebrity. People started figuring out that I escaped evil and posed as good for a while and nobody knew. And that was just the beginning. Everyone, and I…[Read more]
COool!! I’m working on a new POV too!! This is great! BUt I really like Peter-Peony. 🙁
What school does Peony attend? I know she’s morally ambiguous, but she still has to go to one or the other.
Peony was sent back to evil after the pirates were arrested.
@nadea, the Peony-Peter thing is not gone forever, you just have to wait and see…:)
I wake up on the floor. Where am I? I look around. I am somewhere dark. Freaking out I get up. Then I notice bars. Dungeon bars. I run over to them and start banging on them.
“Hello? Is anyone there?” I scream. I call out…[Read more]
Um…. That was good. However, Sienna only says there was something suspicious about Peony AFTER everyone is out of the Room and the pirates are frozen. And Sienna can only do magic because of her talent, I don’t think anyone is Unlocked yet. But maybe that’s Peony’s talent….
Hi guys, um sorry for the notice but, can I not be tagged anymore? It’s not your story, but I just don’t have time to read any anymore. But please continue!
Oh. Oops, I will remember that for the next POV @nadea
But thanks for telling me anyway! 🙂
This is great!! Yeah, nobody’s unlocked, but Sienna has her talent and Lola has water and animal powers. 🙂
Peony also has a talent, just I don’t think anyone knows it yet 😉
Everything is my fault. Liam all beat up is my fault. My mother and my friends at home are at risk and it is pretty much my fault. The thing with Lola and her dad is probably my fault too. And Sienna…[Read more]
Also, this is where I left off on last time. In the lunch room with everyone in it.
Also, @nadea, if you POV anything about what I just wrote, you will have to make it in the past. I forgot you did what happened next to Liam, Lola, and Sienna after lunch.
Okay. That’s fine. It’s okay that it was short, there was a lot of important info in this chapter. Keep up the good work!
Oh. Umm. I forgot it said classified. One sec, I have to think
She is 13, but almost 14
Her b-day will come up in a POV. I promise.
Wait, how old is everyone in the group (as in characters. Not how old you actually are)
Well, Sienna is the youngest at Good at 11. Lola is 14. Liam is 13. Skylar is 13. Peony is 13.
No, wait it’s the 22nd. Never mind. But still, this story is taking place at like end of November/beginning of December.. huh
Sienna is 11 and her birthday is June 10th 2006 so she will be 12 in June. I always thought Lola was 14 and would be 15 next year. Hm.. You can change her age if you want. I think most of the people are around ages 12-14.
New POV! Has a very important thing at the end we all forgot about.
I have been really scared lately, those pirate guys are everywhere. I am walking to my room when I met up with Lola and her friends.
“Oh, hi Peony. Are you okay?” She asked.
I jumped whe…[Read more]
Where is everyone right now? Lola’s in Foxwood with Marie, and everyone else is in Good?
The bathroom thing was not pleasant. And the worse part is, they are watching me. Always watching me. I was walking back and won of them poses as an Everboy I bumped into my first day here. That is apparently how…[Read more]
Good job! I’d just like to remind you to check for tense changes in your writing. Also, a question. How dark are y’all willing to make this? I have some ideas, but they could potentially be too grave.
Well what are your ideas? I’m willing to have someone die, but I don’t really want it to be Lola or her dad. I am dedinitely POVing right away. Probably gonna post in a couple hours, but I won’t include deaths yet.