My Ranking Points
It’s the first day of school!
I went down Purity steps with Suzy to get to beautification class. In class, Professor Anemone greeted us. She explained that today we would be giving makeovers. At the end, I had cute little bangs for curly hair, Overly Pink lips and black lined eyes. Suzy, on the other hand, hadn’t faired so well. Electro-shocked hair, red lips and yellow eye shadow. At home, we had no money for makeup. A silver 2 appeared over Suit’s head while a dull 16 (of 20, so not so bad.) appeared over my own. Professor Anemone appeared, muttering about Sleeping Beauty. We got up, out and ready for animal communication.
Thank you for your time.
Your story’s good, but it would be better if you wrote down the characters’ words and made them longer.
Ok. Thanks for the advice. Would you all like to be tagged?