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Story: Title TBD (Suggestions appreciated)
Chapter 1: The welcoming
Mackenzie got up.
She was going to go to the School for Good and Evil!
She`was waiting for this moment since FOREVER.
She got up and noticed a golden ticket.
“Flowerground. Admit One.`
She rushed to tell her parents.
“Mom, Dad! I’m an Ever!” she exclaimed!
“That’s great sweetie!” they replied.
The next day, she got hugged goodbye, and she was found by the Flowerground.
She woke up and found herself in front of a sparkly castle.
“Oh wow… ” she started.
She was in front of good castle, and surrounded by girls with sparkly satin gowns, and wavy cascades of hair. She immediately felt out of place, though she didn’t envy them. She got up, and marched to the front. Soon enough, fairies herded them inside.
They were headed to an assembly of some sort.
surrounded by girls and boys, one approached her.
“Hello, where did you get your FlowerGround ticket? I think you’re in the wrong school.” she said.
“Ì got my FlowerGround ticket fair and square!” she replied.
The girl was miffed.
Later, they were met by multiple people, the staff members.
“Welcome, dear students, the School for Good and Evil! Here we… ” They said.
She wasn’t listening.
She was focused on what looked like a doorway, faintly visible, behind them.
She was going to check it out.
This is great! The plot itself is a bit fast-paced, but otherwise very interesting.