swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 9 months, 3 weeks ago

    A Coven’s First Year
    Chapter 12-The World’s Worst Mother

    “Hi Hort, do you mind if I take Ash out of class for a while?” Sophie asked.
    “No, not at all.” Hort smiled at Sophie while Ash exited the room. “Will she be back by the end of the lesson?”
    “Probably not.” Sophie replied. She shut the door and turned around to face Ash.“Your mom is he…[Read more]

        hesterjunior replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

        O M G WOW THATS A THRILLERDSS!

          swizza replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

          Glad you liked it!

        evilxaudrey replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

        Ohmy

          swizza replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

          Hope you enjoyed it!

        anwen replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

        Please tag me in the next chapter! This is amazing!

          swizza replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

          I’ll tag you! Thank you so much for your feedback!

        agathawillwin replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

        SO GOOD!!!!

          swizza replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

          Thank you very much!

        emilyy replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

        That’s a great chapter!! I feel really sorry for Ash!

          swizza replied 9 months, 3 weeks ago

          Thank you!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months ago

    A New Coven’s First Year
    Chapter 11-Who’s guilty?

    “All of you will be sent to the Doom Room.” Dovey said, looking serious. “You never leave each other’s side, which means all of you were at the scene of the crime.”
    “Scene of the crime!” Ebony chortled. “Well then, I guess one of us is a criminal!”
    “I suggest you take this matter seriously.” Hort…[Read more]

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 10 months ago

        Eek, they’re in trouble. The conviction in your dialogue is really good, I could definitely picture Nevers saying what you wrote. Another great chapter!

          swizza replied 10 months ago

          Thank you so much!

        hesterjunior replied 10 months ago

        oof! its so good!

          swizza replied 10 months ago

          Thank you very much!

        agathawillwin replied 10 months ago

        Wow! This is amazing!
        Aw, poor Ash, though

          swizza replied 10 months ago

          Thank you!

        emilyy replied 10 months ago

        That’s a great chapter!!

          swizza replied 10 months ago

          Thanks!!!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 1 week ago

    A New Coven’s First Year
    Chapter 10-Torturing an Idiotic Brother

    “Oh look! It’s the coven!” a boy hooted as they walked by.
    Whispers echoed all around them.
    “Let me see…” the boy continued. “I heard that one can control the mind, one can cause pain and one has an army of springs . Absolutely pathetic! I also heard Ash let the springs into sc…[Read more]

        hesterjunior replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        omg! so good! I feel bad for Aron!

          swizza replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          Thank you so much!

        agathawillwin replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        Great job!

          swizza replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          Thank you very much!

        emilyy replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        That’s a great chapter!

          swizza replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          Thank you!

        cuteykitty123 replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        Really good! I can’t wait for the next chapter

          swizza replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          Thank you! Would you like to be tagged?

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    A New Coven’s Adventures
    Chapter 9 – Special Talents
    “Hey, now that I think about it, did we really deserve those ranks? I mean, we didn’t actually do any challenges yesterday. We literally just listened to the teachers prattle on about what we’ll be doing this year.” Nova said.
    “Of course we deserved those ranks! We were the only ones who stayed…[Read more]

        hesterjunior replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        ooh that last sentance! Soo mysterious. Great job!!!

          lionsbane replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          I like it to! Tag me for the next chapter!

          everneveragathasophie replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          tag me plz!

          swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thank you so much!

          delmil replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          wow so detailed I loved it

        agathawillwin replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        OOOHH SO AWESOME GOOD JOB
        love the last sentence

          swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thank you!!!

        emilyy replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Their talents are so cool! I love it!

          swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks!!

        swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        I’ll tag everyone who wants to be tagged! Thank you so much for the feedback everybody!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    Chapter 8-The New Witches of Room 66
    “Well, well, well. Look who decided to show her face. The girl who tried to kill her own blood.” a boy sneered at Ash as she passed his breakfast table.
    “You do know what happens to people who kill their own blood don’t you?” a second boy jeered. “They die. Just like the School Master did. Let that be a warnin…[Read more]

        agathawillwin replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Ohmygod, sorry I’m just seeing this. THIS. IS. AMAZING.

          swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Aww….thank you so much!

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Sooooo good!

          swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thank you so much!

        emilyy replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        I really enjoyed it – especially with Ebony, Nova and Ash making a coven!

          swizza replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thank you!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 4 weeks ago

    Chapter 7-Meeting the Roommates
    The wolf dragged her by the hair.
    Many students stared, her brothers among them. She was brought into the Doom Room, the pain was about to start.
    ***
    Ash stumbled out of the Doom Room, blood and bruises coating every inch of her body. She was not like Sophie, who was thought a haircut was a punishment, she had had…[Read more]

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        Poor Ash! I l think the new characters seem great!

          swizza replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

          Thanks!

        swizza replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        Just so everybody knows, for the next week I will probably not be able to post since I am busy! Sorry!

          agathawillwin replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

          That’s fine! Don’t fret. Good chapter!

          swizza replied 10 months, 3 weeks ago

          Thank you agathawillwin!

        hesterjunior replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        soo good! Poor ash tho

          swizza replied 10 months, 3 weeks ago

          Thanks!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months ago

    Chapter 6-The Decision
    “We have decided that, even if it was an accident, Ash was causing harm to another student. Therefore, we have decided that you will be sent to the Doom Room and will follow Zane’s orders until he forgives you.” Dean Sophie said.
    “What?! That’s unfair!” Ash blurted.
    “It is fair. You almost killed him. He deserves spec…[Read more]

        eloiseruizpalma replied 11 months ago

        this is really good!!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you so much!

        aggieandtedrosx replied 11 months ago

        Awesome!!!!!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you!

        emilyy replied 11 months ago

        Great story!

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 11 months ago

        Fabulous as always! I love your portrayal of Sophie!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you so much!

        agathawillwin replied 11 months ago

        Wow! This was really good!

          swizza replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

          Thank you so much!

        love-rainbow replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        love it

          swizza replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

          Thanks!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months ago

    Chapter 5-A meeting with the Deans
    The words slashed through Ash like a knife. She stumbled back in shock.
    “W-what?” she spluttered.
    “We’ll leave you three alone.” Professor Dovey said as she forced Dean Sophie out of the hall.
    Silence enveloped them.
    “How could you?” Zane asked, his voice soft. “How could you do that to your own brother?” His f…[Read more]

        emilyy replied 11 months ago

        Ooh! Good story! I actually feel sorry for Ash!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you so much!

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 11 months ago

        The plot thickens! This is so exciting!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Glad you think so!

        eloiseruizpalma replied 11 months ago

        ooooh this is goooooood!! tag me please!!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you! I’ll tag you!

        hesterjunior replied 11 months ago

        wow!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          I hope you liked it!

        agathawillwin replied 11 months ago

        Awesome job! I love it

          swizza replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

          Thank you!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months ago

    Chapter 4-The Unpredictable Welcoming
    The wolves continued to drag them down the corridors. They were dropped, leaving them in a queue with other kids to collect their books and uniforms.
    ***
    Ash slipped into her uniform, a modern version, designed by Dean Sophie. They were to be given their dorm rooms later on during the day. Everyone rushed to…[Read more]

        aggieandtedrosx replied 11 months ago

        Oooh, interesting

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thanks! 😊

        hesterjunior replied 11 months ago

        soo good1z

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you! 😄

        jellybean886 replied 11 months ago

        Tag me!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Sure!

        itsmejazzy replied 11 months ago

        Great chapter! Please tag me 🙂

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thanks! I’ll tag you! 😃

        emilyy replied 11 months ago

        Cool plot twist!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thanks! 😊

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 11 months ago

        This is my favourite chapter so far! Brilliantly-written

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Aww….thanks! ☺️

        agathawillwin replied 11 months ago

        So good! I love it.

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you so much! 🤗

        nevermao replied 11 months ago

        I wish I could write like that.🙂

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          I’m sure you can! My writing isn’t good at all!

    swizza posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months ago

    Chapter 3-The Fatal Accident
    Putrid air filled her lungs.
    Ash desperately flailed for her brothers. Her hand found Zane. She held onto him, pleading him to never let go. Zane swam to the edge of the moat, Ash digging her nails into his shoulders.
    “Get out!” Zane commanded. “I’ll find Blade.”
    Ash used all her strength to hoist herself up onto l…[Read more]

        hesterjunior replied 11 months ago

        wow amazin tag me

          hesterjunior replied 11 months ago

          that kinda sad though

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you! I’ll definitely tag you!

        aggieandtedrosx replied 11 months ago

        Tag me please! Please tell me she didn’t drown Zane!

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          I’ll tag you! You’ll have to find out whether Zane’s actually dead in the next chapter….

        elizaofjauntjolie replied 11 months ago

        This is brilliant! Poor Zane though.

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thanks!

        emilyy replied 11 months ago

        That’s really good! (but sad)

          swizza replied 11 months ago

          Thank you!

          agathawillwin replied 11 months ago

          I agree! Amazing job!

        swizza replied 11 months ago

        Thank you everyone for such kind comments!

          agathawillwin replied 11 months ago

          Just the truth! The chapter was, admittedly short, but the length fit the writing plot of it, and so it was REALLY good!

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