GUYS!!!! if you have the ever-never handbook, check the FAQ section. there will be a question on Rafal’s brother. it says his name was RHIAN! coincedence? i think not!!
I’ve said this countless times, people are still surprised XD
(I was surprised to find it when I found out)
The First Day Of A New School
It was almost the end of the school year. Orla Whitebow was walking up the stairs to her new school, Diamond Coast High School, her new school subjects in her arms. She waved her aunt good bye saying, “thanks for getting me to school, I can t…[Read more]
A big dark green car was driving along a small dirt road. Two girls were waiting in…[Read more]
The evil king
“Your majesty, Gemma’s alive, I tell you, she’s ALIVE!” said the evil soldier. “Oh *******!” the evil king said. I SAW her fall into the moat and drown, right honey? Besides, there are a lot of girls named Gemma in this kingdom.” he was sitting down on his newly claimed throne watching his newly claimed kingdom. “Tha…[Read more]
sorry, school got in the way. chapter 2!
The enemy king still thinks I’m dead. But I’m actually alive and well due to the fact that the crocodiles in the moat recognized as their owner, feeder, and a royal family member and saved me from falling and hurting myself. Now its 4 years since my mom and dad’s death. I’m going t…[Read more]
Chapter 1. Presumably Dead.
My whole family died four years ago, when I was ten. my parents were hosting a grand ball that night so I could choose my prince and get married. (my relatives were invited and they accepted.) I’m clove. the only person who lived through that night. I was taking a swig of fruit punch when I suddenly had to go to the…[Read more]
That is a chilling begining, awesome chapter. Tip- might want to check areas were you should capitalize, for example first word for quotes from characters are normally capitalized.
Wow! Very cool. Just a tip, when a character speaks, they get their own line. Also, when you’re writing, try not to rush what you’re writing, let the story flow with detail. 🙂
parents/relatives/linage: none; they all were killed.
school: none; i live out in the wild.
personality: is very trained and active.is also very sweet if you don’t get on her wrong side.
flaws: warning. very short temper and attention span.
appearance: tall,skinny, with big bright hazel eyes. has her father’s…[Read more]