tala123 posted an update in the group Book 4: QUESTS FOR GLORY 3 years, 3 months ago

    GUYS!!!! if you have the ever-never handbook, check the FAQ section. there will be a question on Rafal’s brother. it says his name was RHIAN! coincedence? i think not!!

        macy08 replied 3 years, 3 months ago

        Bro, that says that in the 4th book

          tala123 replied 3 years, 3 months ago

          yeah but it does not say that he is the good brother

          justinnian replied 3 years, 3 months ago

          Yeah

        pugsforever replied 3 years, 3 months ago

        I’ve said this countless times, people are still surprised XD
        (I was surprised to find it when I found out)

          tala123 replied 3 years, 3 months ago

          IKR

          angelobella replied 3 years, 3 months ago

          Me too!!

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 5 months ago

    Chapter 1
    The First Day Of A New School
    It was almost the end of the school year. Orla Whitebow was walking up the stairs to her new school, Diamond Coast High School, her new school subjects in her arms. She waved her aunt good bye saying, “thanks for getting me to school, I can t…[Read more]

        mowofthewoodsbeyond replied 3 years, 5 months ago

        Cool chapter tag me

        happilyeveraftergirl replied 3 years, 5 months ago

        Good chapter! But maybe you should make it more SGE related?

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 5 months ago

    Prologue
    The Wreck
    A big dark green car was driving along a small dirt road. Two girls were waiting in…[Read more]

        tala123 replied 3 years, 5 months ago

        oh, that’s cool!

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 5 months ago

    hey guys! i’ve been in the middle of nanowrimo, a write your book n a month program. i’ll give you the first draft/sloppy copy for now. 🙂

        tala123 replied 3 years, 5 months ago

        oh, oops! XD

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 7 months ago

    Chapter 3
    The evil king
    “Your majesty, Gemma’s alive, I tell you, she’s ALIVE!” said the evil soldier. “Oh *******!” the evil king said. I SAW her fall into the moat and drown, right honey? Besides, there are a lot of girls named Gemma in this kingdom.” he was sitting down on his newly claimed throne watching his newly claimed kingdom. “Tha…[Read more]

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 7 months ago

    sorry, school got in the way. chapter 2!
    Chapter 2
    Well trained
    The enemy king still thinks I’m dead. But I’m actually alive and well due to the fact that the crocodiles in the moat recognized as their owner, feeder, and a royal family member and saved me from falling and hurting myself. Now its 4 years since my mom and dad’s death. I’m going t…[Read more]

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 8 months ago

    Chapter 1. Presumably Dead.
    My whole family died four years ago, when I was ten. my parents were hosting a grand ball that night so I could choose my prince and get married. (my relatives were invited and they accepted.) I’m clove. the only person who lived through that night. I was taking a swig of fruit punch when I suddenly had to go to the…[Read more]

        espilce replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        That is a chilling begining, awesome chapter. Tip- might want to check areas were you should capitalize, for example first word for quotes from characters are normally capitalized.

          tala123 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          yea i usually 4get when 2 capitalize… sry

        dot111 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Wow! Very cool. Just a tip, when a character speaks, they get their own line. Also, when you’re writing, try not to rush what you’re writing, let the story flow with detail. 🙂

          tala123 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

          thx 4 the tips. 🙂

    tala123 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 8 months ago

    name: Clove.
    age: 14.
    gender: female.
    parents/relatives/linage: none; they all were killed.
    school: none; i live out in the wild.
    personality: is very trained and active.is also very sweet if you don’t get on her wrong side.
    flaws: warning. very short temper and attention span.
    appearance: tall,skinny, with big bright hazel eyes. has her father’s…[Read more]