theno-1princess posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 7 months ago

    Hey, just a quick question. How do you form your own group? Do you have to be high ranking?

        arian2 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nope! Not at all!

        ariniegold replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Do you mean make a new forum. There is no possible way to do that.
        You can just create and RP and ask people to join though in this level. Though best to save it on another object like goggle doc or a word doc so you have it all grouped together incase I oen of you misses a bit and can’t swim through the forum for it.

        arian2 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        You don’t create your own “group”, if you mean, like, the actual RP levels. But you can make a group RP!

        peppy replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        In Level 0, we usually write our own fairytales, but group RP’s are perfectly fine! ๐Ÿ˜‰

          cassidyofleighshollow11 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

          What makes RP levels 3 and 1 different from 0?

        ariniegold replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Level one is quite similar only is more likely to give constructive criticism especially when asked there are no real restrictions except for the bio commonly has to be in the correct format but they do not complain or to much state it they’ll just suggest adding things. They have the choice to RP alone or in groups. In level two and three however…[Read more]

    theno-1princess posted an update 4 years, 8 months ago

    Meanwhile…
    Clarissa Dovey had seen better days. With the new year on the horizon, the professor couldn’t help but doubt the… potential that would come through the school gates in a mater of weeks. After Ella and Snowdrop left to seek their promising ever afters in the woods, the fairytales her graduates produced didn’t seem to have as much…[Read more]

    theno-1princess posted an update 4 years, 8 months ago

    the King’s seemingly perfect life was an illusion, created to satisfy his subjects, and most certainly his own daughter. What if her Father was truly happy with his fate? Warmth began to seep into Thea’s frozen heart, a smile spreading across her rosy lips. He was happy, that was all that mattered to the princess. Her joy did not last long,…[Read more]

    theno-1princess posted an update 4 years, 8 months ago

    Thea’s whole body shook uncontrollably, the body of her Father lying limp on the ground. She’d never seen anything so still, so empty, so… peaceful. Thea’s shining blue eyes widened; her Father looked HAPPY (I couldn’t put it in italics). Maybey

    theno-1princess posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    Whoever reads my story, i’d love some “constructive criticism” as my English teacher puts it.

        rosethorn11 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        sure!!

        athene replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        The only thing I can think of is that after quotation marks (but before the words) you don’t need a space, just go right into the word. Other than that, I can’t really find any faults. ๐Ÿ˜‰

        tutlion2 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        I can’t find any faults either!

          arian2 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Itโ€™s really great. ๐Ÿ˜€ Keep on writing!
          If you really want constructive criticism, Iโ€™d say: donโ€™t over complicate your sentences. Sometimes, a simple structure is much more effective. You could achieve much more if you reigned it in and used wordplay to maximum effect. Instead of,
          โ€œA pool of Crimson liquid,โ€ how about, โ€œhis life bleeding aw…[Read more]

    theno-1princess posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    ” Thea, Thea listen to me you stupid girl!” Princess Thea whirled round to see her Father staring at her with wide, desperate eyes, deep, irreversible worry lines etched into his once youthful face. Tears streamed down her cheeks, stinging like acid. Outside, the small world that the Princess had known for twelve, long years was crumbling before…[Read more]

        reemkahin replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        I thinks it’s a great story, beautifully written. I have no “constructive criticism”.

        arian2 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        It’s really great. ๐Ÿ˜€ Keep on writing!
        If you really want constructive criticism, I’d say: don’t over complicate your sentences. Sometimes, a simple structure is much more effective. You could achieve much more if you reigned it in and used wordplay to maximum effect. Instead of,
        “A pool of Crimson liquid,” how about, “his life bleeding away into…[Read more]

          arian2 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Oh! I forgot. Have you heard of, “show, not tell?” Well, I think this is something you could work on. For example, we know that she’s depressed from your great story and description. So don’t say, “depressed trance.” Just talk about the event. Or her reaction. It’s much more creative and interesting to read if you imply that she’s depressed.…[Read more]

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        You should become an author when you grow up. I would love to read more of your stories.

          theno-1princess replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Thank you so much! Even though i’m only ten, i’ve been thinking about being an author, but i wasn’t sure anybody else thought i could be…

    theno-1princess posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    this is the PERFECT group! i adore making up my own S.G.E. stories in my notebook; who knew i could actually put them to some use!

        arian2 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Glad to hear it!