Chapter 2 Rose
My eyes slowly opened. Where was I? I looked at the room around me, the dim lights flickered and I curled up comfortably on the bed I was lying on. A few moments later, a tired-looking, chubby lady walked through the door and sat on the wooden stool next to me. She dipped a white cloth into a bucket then placed it on my forehead, it…[Read more]
Sorry to DIAMONDSPARKLE7 and CUTEKITTY123 whose tags haven’t worked.
Just realised I got your tag names wrong sorry, will tag you guys in Chapter 3.
Idk, I didn’t put them there and there’s no missing word, I’ve checked…
Who likes the Ever meals? I think they’re too small. I am an Ever! No wonder they get so skinny!
The dessert looks great. Everything else…. meh. I don’t like goat cheese. BUT I’M NOT SWITCHING TO EVIL(yet)
Evil can eat what we want
And we can eat candy
And food that’s actually edible
I dont want to be fat or unhealthy, and good is amazing, I would LLLOOOOVVVVVVEEE beautification
I was running. I was running as fast as I could. I was trying to venture as far away from my parents as possible. I stumbled over branches and rocks that jutted out of the ground. I was tired and my satchel was thumping hard against my leg but I couldn’t stop now. I ran on as the sun set and as the moon and stars came out. I looked in my…[Read more]
I don’t know what tag means. Anywho, It’s awesome! I wonder if the blast was just her power or something that she summoned that just happened to have dynomite.
When a person only sees black, she or he always wakes up in a totally different place. I think she’ll end up in Camelot or something. Good story!
@sure , a tag is when you put an @ symbol before someones name and they get a notification.
For example, if I tagged someone every time I wrote a chapter of a story,they would get a notification saying that a new part was out and they’d be able to read it.
I tagged you at the start:
Here is my bio:
Appearance: Straight, shoulder length brown hair, hazel eyes, red lips and a pale complextion.
Personality: Brave, loyal, determined, clever, kind, understanding, leader.
Talents: She can interact with animals and can teleport within a five mile radius.
Strengths: Being a leader,…[Read more]
Didn’t mean it like that sorry just wanted 2 know if it was good enogh
Idk I meant do you like it or is it good (in your opinion) or not (or something along those lines)
how blunt do you want me to be?
and if you tell me to be as blunt as I would naturally be, you can’t get mad at me for me answer
Just be honest, I don’t mind, cos what I’ll do is improve it and then repost it, I’d rather know how to improve it then think it’s ok.
okay so the character is pretty bland, not unique.
in her own right she is kinda unique but I’ve seen this same character so many times before
maybe try and flesh out the character, make her more complex, more human
okay if she’s in year three, should wouldn’t be thirteen
also, make your character more realistic and complex, like a real person
also also, her parents aren’t her grandparents, that’s’ not how that works
I commented on somebody’s post and then when I looked back to see if anyone had commented on that post apart from me it said 0 comments. Where did my comment go?
Eye colour: Hazel
Hair colour: Dark brown
Personality: Brave, loyal, kind, clever and determined
Wearing: Dark blue vest top, black leather jacket, black trousers, black boots, a blue ribbon in her hair and a heart locket hanging from her neck
Most treasured possesion: the heart locket from her magical and…[Read more]
Hester’s guide on how to survive the doom room must be very helpful for the nevers. I’m so glad there is a groom room, it sounds so relaxing! Comment if you are an ever or never! I am an ever!
I think that Emma Watson should be in the movies because she’s an amazing actress. Not sure of the part she should play. Please comment if you have any suggestions.