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Chapter Eleven: The Ship ( Jasper’s P.O.V.)
Let’s skip past the long journey to the coast, where Jasper stole or threatened every copper and bite of food on his way. It’s all quite irrelevant, anyway, and agonisingly boring.
Jasper had never been to the coast before. His father had operated a resistance in the middle of Kallias, connecting to bo…[Read more]
Here’s Chapter Eleven: Betrayal (Layla’s P.O.V.)
The news of the war and the attack swept away the wave of fear and rioting that followed the Second Accident. The Kallian Empire. It was a place that she only knew from her history textbooks, a place that was surrounded by an aura of mystery. Despite the fact that it was in a desert, and was lik…[Read more]
Could you please untag me? I love your story, it’s not that I don’t like it, I just don’t want to be tagged for it anymore! Thanks and sorry if you didn’t this at all offensive!
Okay, sure. Would you mind telling me why? Is there something you think I should do differently?
Sorry I haven’t posted in a while.
I now present Chapter Ten of Three Broken Kingdoms (look for the rest in my activity).
The news rung through her ears. There would be no going home with Kestra this summer. Maybe not the summer after, or the summer after that. A general did not go back to the palace when a war was raging. Nor did a W…[Read more]
Hi everyone! Here are the bios for Aaron & Lysandra to go with their recent chapter!
Full Name: Princess Lysandra Crimson of the Kallian Empire.
Nickname: Sandy (Aaron only. Should anyone else call her Sandy…)
Title: Princess of the Kallian Empire.
Age: 18 (physical years-due to taking Immortality Elixir). 19 (actual y…[Read more]
Does anyone else think it would be a good ending for Sophie to die for Agatha? I feel like whilst that would be so sad (I would literally DIE) it would be a really good ending. Sort of linking it back to Book 1, except that this time Sophie wouldn’t come back.
I agree! With everything, I would be so sad but yeah! I feel like Soman’s gonna do something evil to us
Somehow, my friend hates Sophie
HOW COULD ANYBODY HATE SOPHIE
She already did first year, which wouldnt be such a good idea… But maybe
Yeah, definitely, it would take the series full circle, and would establish once and for all the Sophie is Good. But I don’t know if Soman would be able to kill his favorite character. I feel like by the end we would have some sort of definite proof that Sophie is Good, because that’s what she’s been trying to prove this while series.
Here’s my next chapter of Three Broken Kingdoms, in Lysandra and Aaron’s P.O.V. I’ll release their bios soon.
Chapter Nine: Lucifer Green
Lysandra breathed in the muggy air of Cathay, looking out from her primitive inn ‘suite’, as she took in the marketplace. Cathay was lucky enough to be connected to a system of roads that had been built a f…[Read more]
Ok, here’s my bios for Jasper & Nala. Scroll down to find Jasper’s last chapter and in my activity there’s another chapter with both.
Full Name: Captain Jasper Merson of Kallias.
Nickname: Jasper doesn’t do nicknames. Except everyone gives him them. ‘J’ and ‘Jasp’ are among the more common ones.
Title: Captain of the Kallian Army.
Bios for Jasper & Nala coming soon!
Here is Chapter Eight: The Desert
At some point, through his shock, Jasper Merson realised that his men knew he had told his aunt to run. He realised that they were trying to trick him into a false sense of security, and if he slept, he would wake up in chains.Or not at all. It was around this time when Jasper…[Read more]
Here’s the next chapter of my story, Three Broken Kingdoms. Look at my activity for bios and the past chapters.
After the chaos and stress following the Accident, her parents had finally managed to slip away from the court, taking a night for themselves out of the busy week.
She stood in an little garden outside an old home in Veron, bedecked w…[Read more]
Here’s the sixth chapter of my story. It has the same characters as Chapter Six, who’s bios are now up.
Three Broken Kingdoms. Chapter Six:
The dawn was here, its pale tendrils slipping through the mountains. Myra was already there, on the training field, her fingers tracing the dragon-carved hilts of her twin blades. She’d sharpened the s…[Read more]