turquoisefox posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    OK, I already made a bios, but it was bad so I’m gonna start over again.
    Character 1:

    Name: Erica
    Gander: female
    Appearance: brown hair, green eyes, tan skin, small nose
    School: good
    Parents: Rapunzel and Daniel aka Rapunzel’s prince
    Finger glow: turquoise
    Personality: kind, but a little short tempered
    Talents: Singing, drawing
    Clothing: long,…[Read more]

        bella777 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        I like the improved bio! One thing though, would you like to add more personality to Erica? She could be sarcastic, or a genius, or anything you want her to be. The more detailed the bio, the better your readers identify with the character. Other than that, you did a really good job!

    turquoisefox posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    Name: Erica
    Age: 12
    Fairytale relatives: I’m a reader
    Hobby: singing, drawing
    Description: dark brown hair, green eyes, small nose, tan skin. Kind, but a little short-tenpered
    Favorite color: turquoise
    Favorite animal: fox

        espilce replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Nice start but I feel like the bio is lacking, add personally, talent and finger glow

          espilce replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          Also the school

        boomboompancakes replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Yeah