turquoisefox posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago
Name: Erica
Age: 12
Fairytale relatives: I’m a reader
Hobby: singing, drawing
Description: dark brown hair, green eyes, small nose, tan skin. Kind, but a little short-tenpered
Favorite color: turquoise
Favorite animal: fox
espilce replied 4 years, 6 months ago
Nice start but I feel like the bio is lacking, add personally, talent and finger glow
espilce replied 4 years, 6 months ago
Also the school
boomboompancakes replied 4 years, 6 months ago
Yeah
OK, I already made a bios, but it was bad so I’m gonna start over again.
Character 1:
Name: Erica
Gander: female
Appearance: brown hair, green eyes, tan skin, small nose
School: good
Parents: Rapunzel and Daniel aka Rapunzel’s prince
Finger glow: turquoise
Personality: kind, but a little short tempered
Talents: Singing, drawing
Clothing: long,…[Read more]
I like the improved bio! One thing though, would you like to add more personality to Erica? She could be sarcastic, or a genius, or anything you want her to be. The more detailed the bio, the better your readers identify with the character. Other than that, you did a really good job!