umastar19 posted an update in the group Book 3: THE LAST EVER AFTER 1 month ago

    how ignorant was Tedros in this book

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    Chapter 8 hope you enjoy

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    As she started to get up josh held her tighter so she lied back down. Alex got up and walked over with a teddy bear he slowly grabbed Hazels waist and switched the teddy bear for her and immediately left them alone and…[Read more]

        2iycrb2qawutob replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Awesome!!! Some tips though and please don’t take these the wrong way I’m just trying to help <333
        – When someone speaks it should be like this
        "Hey," Emma said
        "Oh, hi there."
        "How are you?"
        "Pretty good, what about you?"
        etc.
        – If it is past tense it should be laid/lay (same thing) not lied (unless you're talking about someone deceiving…[Read more]

          umastar19 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          thanks all that’s really helpful

          2iycrb2qawutob replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          No problem 😀

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    chapter 7
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    As they walked hazle slowly but surely fell asleep in josh’s arms. He looked down at her and thought she is kinda cute no josh no you just met her and you can’t let anyone in they’ll hurt you more. When they got inside josh decided to take her to his…[Read more]

        2iycrb2qawutob replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Tag me please!!! Can I submit a bio?

          umastar19 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          i will and of course i could always use more bios

          2iycrb2qawutob replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          Coolio, here’s a bio 🙂
          Name: Atlas Garcia
          Age: 15
          gender: cis male
          Pronouns: he/him
          Sexuality: closeted bi
          School: evil
          Appearance:
          Personality: Atlas is a loud soul, he always voices his opinions and won’t ever stay quiet. He likes making snarky comments and remarks about people and is very sarcastic, he has a lot of weapons always on him and…[Read more]

          umastar19 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          that is a great bio btw

          2iycrb2qawutob replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks 😀

          umastar19 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          well its true and ill use him in the next chapter oh and when do you think i should write it

          2iycrb2qawutob replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          Umm I’m not sure whenever you can, you can write it now if you’re free or if you aren’t then do it when you are :))

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    Chapter 6
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    They all froze in fear the teacher looked calmly fay josh hazle why are you here well said jash tucking his hair behind his ear and swinging his leg nervously hazle realized it was professor leo she hoped he would go easy on her she was right he said…[Read more]

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    Hello and chapter 5 hope you like it
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    CHAPTER 5
    She Walked threw the hallway she looked at the walls and the decoration she saw pictures of famous heros and she realized that meant villains were real to she shivered and closed her then eyes for a second she bangd…[Read more]

        umastar19 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        ill do more later

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    Hello people chapter 4 hope you like it
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    CHAPTER 4
    He stared at her in disbelief “what did he look like child”said professor leo “w-w-well h-h-he had white hair and blue eyes but yet he looked young and he looked just like the man in the stories that my mother tells me” said hazel a few minutes…[Read more]

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    another chapter hope you enjoy
    CHAPTER 3
    As hazel ran threw the Gate she saw a field with the sun shimmering off it
    Then she saw a clearing and to her disbelief two buildings or like her mother said the school for good and evil
    she ran towards the buildings scared that what was following her would catch up she banged on the doors She could…[Read more]

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    chapter 2 hope you enjoy

    CHAPTER 2
    She tore away from the things gripp she stared in disbelief it was the school master from her mothers stories… her eyes widened she started to run
    She saw a gate and ran through it . her mother stared in horror at the gate
    She remembered her first day at school
    Sitting on a picnic blanket in front of the s…[Read more]

    umastar19 posted an update in the group THE EVER NEVER HANDBOOK Talk 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    im going to post all previous chapters to catch yall up

    As little Hazel ran through the forest she could hear a noise behind her she’s was scared out of her mind she kept running and running running running until it banged into her she fell to the ground she didn’t know what had hit her everything was blurry she couldn’t see anything but then a…[Read more]

    umastar19 posted an update in the group Book 3: THE LAST EVER AFTER 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    im sad. why you might ask ? well its because i cant cotinue my story because the group isnt here anymore 🙁

        champion3 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        You can write your story in The Ever Never Handbook.

          umastar19 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          great idea thanks

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