veiveisge posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 6 months ago

    Chapter One:
    Evil Halls
    Tags:
    @veivei2009
    @nataliet101
    @hesteralltheway267
    @cat2020
    The bony stymph bird screeches and drops me on the Evil side. A splash erupts as my slender body hits the surface of the sludge moat. As I come up for air, gasping, my trunk slams beside me and litters my face with muck.
    I paddle to my trunk and drag it along…[Read more]

        maddie5 replied 6 months ago

        omg thats really good can you plz tag me 😊

        nataliet101 replied 6 months ago

        OK. WOW. That is so amazing!!!!!!!! 🙂

        shelbytessa replied 6 months ago

        This sounds like it could be good!! Please tag me!

        karenthealien replied 6 months ago

        This is really good! Please tag me!

        agathafourlife replied 6 months ago

        Wow I love this! Tag me please!!!

        lulu256 replied 6 months ago

        tag me plz

    veiveisge posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 6 months, 1 week ago

    I pour the bubbly green substance in with the aqua gel in my beaker, a small gray fire leaking green smoke. I blow the flame out and pour my thick turquoise liquid into a small stone bowl. I peel some tadpole-sized eels from Mother’s bowl into my stone bowl and smash them with my mashing stick. I pour the dark teal mixture into my mouth, feeling…[Read more]

        veiveisge replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        Feel free to comment & I will tag anyone willing!

        veiveisge replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        BTW the face in the mirror is not Mira. It’s the Evil Queen’s mirror on the wall, like when she asked who was the prettiest of them all.

        veivei2009 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        Tag me! I love your story bro!

          veiveisge replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          Sure thing @veivei2009!

        nataliet101 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        WHOA!!!! That sounds AMAZING!!! tag me!!! PLZ!!!

        eloiseruizpalma replied 6 months ago

        Wow, this is really well written and I love all of the adjectives. You’re really talented! One thing, however, is that you say ‘my hands regaining their willowy form’ and in the next sentence, it says ‘my shoulders regain their Queenly form.’ which repeats, so for the second time, you could use restore and shape so it would be ‘my hands regaining…[Read more]

          veiveisge replied 6 months ago

          Thanks! That is a well-thought out comment, and I’m usually good at those types of things, but I guess I missed one. Do you want to be tagged?

          eloiseruizpalma replied 6 months ago

          No, that’s ok! I just like to read snippets of things! But that really was very good! :DD

    veiveisge posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 6 months, 1 week ago

    Name: Mirabella
    Nickname: Mira
    Age: 13
    School: Evil
    Personality: Cunning, flaunting, direct, determined,
    Parentage/Lineage: Evil Queen and an unknown vampire
    Appearance: Flawless pale skin, button nose, violet eyes, sculpted purple lips, long fringy eyelashes, slender form
    Fingerglow: Velvety purple
    Talent: Can digest any poison…[Read more]

        veiveisge replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        BTW the girl in the red cloak is one of my friends’ stories, @Veivei2009!

          veiveisge replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          Comment with good or bad feedback, no harm done! Open to any tagging.

        cat2020 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        Hello I am Alex daughter of maleficent first year never nice to meet you

          veiveisge replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          Nice to meet you too! I’m Mirabella, but my bio probably already told you that.

        hesteralltheway267 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        nice tag me please!!

        cat2020 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        Tag me for the chapter book

        nataliet101 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        WOW!!! That is Amazing!!! Tag me 4 the story!!