vinaa

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    vinaa posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 7 months ago

    Bio
    Name:Catherine
    Gender:female
    Appearance:tall,thin,has blonde hair,sweet face,rosythe cheeks
    Age:12
    Fingerglow:blue
    Characteristics:always in a good mood ,,has a craving for sweets
    Wears:blue gown(sometimes pink)
    Talent:speaks to animals
    School:Good
    Fairy tale lineage:Cinderella
    Status:daughter
    Eyes:sky blue
    Pet:Luscinda the cat
    Best friend:Linda(Anastesia’s daughter)
    From:the woods

    Chapter 1
    It’s time!
    It was a fine morning when Catherine’s mother rushed to her room,”It’s time,honey.Pack your things.Oh!I’m so exited!””Mother ,what time are you talking about? Why must I pack my things?”but her mother wasn’t there .She was stunned.Suddenly, she heard someone sneezing her room.”Linda what are you doing here and how did you sneek into my castle?”A pale skin red head girl poked out from the princess ********* a long story.You don’t need to know…..sooo where are you going ?””Nowhere why?””Your mother ask you to pack your stuff..”Catherine was silent after that.
    “I think I know why…Every year princesses and princes are brought to a place where they become heroes same goes to the villainous children.I was waiting for this time to come and now here it is.I got to start packing now .It’s my dream to meet other princesses dance with princes,kiss…”but Linda wasn’t listening,none of that matter ,who would be my friend when Catherine is gone..I don’t want to be alone in the woods.”Catherine,do you think I would be taken too…I’m scared to be alone…””I’m pretty sure you would be taken too..maybe we would be roommates.Don’t worry,Linda I’m here for you.””Catherine who are you talking to?””I’m talking to myself mother.hmmmm,mother do you think Linda would be taken too?””I’m not sure honey…Less talking …You have many things to pack maybe the butler can help you..”Catherine searched for Linda but she was long gone.
    That evening Catherine ate her meal without saying a word .Charming and Cinderella’s faces were so sad .Catherine hadn’t seen their faces this sour before.After dinner Catherine straight went to her room.She heard a knock at the door she opened it to find her mother in tears.”We are going to miss you honey.Promise you would become a true princess.”Catherine hugged her mother as never before.After a few minutes she was sleeping in her bed dreaming away.
    Catherine heard her window open. She took a quick glance around two big brown eyes stare back at her.”What are you doing here?Aren’t you suppose to be sleeping…”but Linda didn’t let her continue.”I saw something move””It’s probably the school master.He has come for me”.
    Suddenly, something(or maybe someone) scooped her up.She saw something else in it’s hand.There Linda was being carried but she was silent( Linda passed out right after she was carried) .When Linda asked from a nightmare she felt themselves leave the ground.As something spindly and cold wrapped them the something( or someone)was gone.They were cyclones in the creepers of an elm ,which ferried them up the enormous tree and Cooperstown on the lowest branch. The branch wobbled,coiled back like a sling and shot them up like bullets.Before either could scream they landed on another branch.Then another branch coiled them up and shot them to the next branch.Pingponging up branches their bodies crashed,dresses tearing on thorns and twigs,until finally they reached the highest bough.There a bird made of only bones were waiting for them.The bird’s screech rattled their eardrums.Then it grabbed them both and dove of the tree.
    Catherine opened her eyes to rays of sun.Beneath them ,two castles came to view.One castle fluttered in the sun rays,with pink and blue turrets over a sparkling lake.The other black and jagged, sharp spires ripping through thunderclouds.
    The School for Good and Evil.
    The bird dropped Catherine in the glittering school .Catherine gasped my destiny….suddenly the thought of Linda occurred .She wasn’t there with her.Catherine noticed the bony bird headed towards the rotten,jagged school.A slight chill ran through her back bone.Linda is in the School for Evil.

        dot111 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nice start. The bio could have a bit more detail, and you need to put a space after every comma, full-stop, quotation mark, etc. Also, when you make a character speak, they get their own line. It makes it less confusing as to who the speaker is. Great job though. 🙂 Are you new here? If so:
        Welcome to RP level 0! Here on level 0 everyone writes their own stories, usually about SGE, (school for good and evil) but you can write about whatever you want if you don’t want to write about SGE.
        Even though I’m not an elder, I’m always happy to help along with pretty much everybody else on level 0. Our elder is @caramelprincess, and she’s really nice.
        On level 0 we have a welcoming committee or WC for short. I’m part of the welcoming committee along with a few other members: @fairytalegirl123, @luna101 and @kiko55. Again, these people are happy to help and answer questions. 🙂
        There is also one rule you might want to follow:
        No one-liners, they push everybody else’s stories to the bottom and prevents us from seeing their amazing writing. (A one-liner is literally one line of text.)
        If you’re going to write a story I recommend you to post your story in chapters so it’s easier to read, it’s not too long and it’s easier for you to write.
        If you’re going to write a biography or as we call it for short, a bio, you might want to include these elements to help you get started-
        *Name:
        *Age
        *Gender:
        *Family:
        *Village:
        Pets:
        *School:
        *Finger glow:
        Flaw(s):
        Talents:
        *Appearance:
        Clothes:
        *Personality:
        *Backstory:
        Friends:
        If this is a bit too much information to have to write, I know I didn’t have this much content when I started, you don’t have to include all of if it, just the main points, which have an asterisk (the little star symbol) beside it.
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        Here’s an Ever’s bio and a Never’s bio I made up that you could use to help you-
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        Name: Ophelia
        Age: 13
        Gender: Female
        Family: Ophelia’s mother is Rapunzel and her father is the king of Maidenvale.
        Village: Maidenvale
        Pets: Ophelia has a white unicorn called Lilli.
        School: Good
        Finger glow: Soft pink
        Flaw(s): Ophelia is quite soft and girly at times, and she doesn’t knows how to fend for herself without the help of others.
        Talents: Ophelia can speak to animals and she has a beautiful, harmonic voice.
        Appearance: Ophelia has luscious, knee-length golden hair, large brown eyes which always sparkle, delicate, pink lips and soft, fair skin.
        Clothes: Ophelia loves to wear white or pink frilly dresses, packed with lace, beads and ribbons. She likes to match her dresses with white wedges or heels topped with flowers. Ophelia also likes to add flowers in her hair, along with bracelets, earrings and necklaces to her bright, sparkly outfit.
        Personality: Ophelia is sweet and caring. She loves to care for animals and her appearance. Over obsessed, Ophelia cares about her appearance far to much than reality around her. She can’t do anything herself without help from maids or pretty much any person within a close distance to her.
        Backstory: Ophelia lived a life of royalty; she had people helping her every second she needed it. She had people make her bed, choose her dress, brush her hair, even take care of her pets. Let’s just say that Ophelia lived a life not knowing how to do much at all. When Ophelia received her Flowerground ticket, she was overjoyed. But when she arrived everything changed; everyone had their own friends, their own things to do and their own life to live. After seeing all of this Ophelia suddenly felt useless and scared. She tried to make friends and join their future plans, but she didn’t really fit in, until the day she met Goldilocks’ daughter, April.
        Friends: April
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        Name: Ace
        Age: 14
        Gender: Male
        Family: Ace has a twin sister called Diamond and his mother is the Red Queen. Ace doesn’t know his father.
        Village: Wonderland
        Pets: Ace has a scarlet red dragon called Hunter.
        School: Never
        Finger glow: Blood red
        Flaw(s): When Ace cheats in card games, sometimes he gets caught and is heavily punished.
        Talents: Ace has a real specialty when it comes to using spears, pickpocketing and cheating in card games, which wins lots of money and jewels.
        Appearance: Ace has sharp, scarlet red hair, piercing, ebony, black eyes, paper-white skin, a cold grin and pointed ears. Ace is also quite tall and slender.
        Clothes: Ace likes to wear black shirts, ripped black jeans, red and black plaid hoodies, black boots and black, leather, fingerless gloves.
        Personality: Ace is dark, bossy and manipulative. Ace feels he needs to be in control for everything he does or is a part of. At times Ace tries to act as powerful and as mean as his mother was, he yells at people doing the wrong thing when he orders them to do something else and he attempts to punish people and threatens them with beheadings or torture. Ace also loves to trick people into doing his ***** work. He uses his treasured talent to manipulate them and instructs them to do his unwanted work.
        Backstory: Ace lived in the Red Heart castle in Wonderland with his mother, the Red Queen and twin sister, Diamond. The Red Queen was always so busy with ruling over the land, she forgot about her two kids. She never did anything with them, so Ace and Diamond taught themselves a few tricks. Ace taught Diamond how to manipulate and pickpocket, and Diamond taught Ace how to cheat. Together they worked as an unstoppable team, until Ace was taken to the school for Evil, without Diamond.
        Friends: Ace is friends with a few Nevers called Quinn, Terrence and Crow.
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        I know, this may seem like a lot of information now bubbling around in your head, but it’ll all become clear very soon. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask, you’ll always receive a response. 😉
        When you start writing, don’t worry about if others might judge you, or if the reader might not like it, we’ll always help and give you guiding tips if you need it.
        Also, when you see other people’s stories, they might have people’s names tagged. If you want to tag people you type the @ symbol then the person’s username, you might want to ask to tag people before you do so. When you tag people all it does is create a link to the person’s profile, where you can read their stories, see their groups, when they started and how many points they’ve got.
        To see your stories, name, points, groups and start date you press the ‘my report card’ button, where it’ll take you to your stories and other info.
        I also want to give you a really important tip, do not type your story straight into the ‘what’s new?’ box. The reason why is because if you turn off your device, close down the page or refresh the page all your writing disappears. (Let’s just say, I had to learn it the hard way.) I highly recommend writing your story in an external document such as word, pages, google docs or any other application you have your hands on.
        Yes, even more information, but this will help you write a fabulous story!
        If you want to check out my story and my bios go here @Dot111, then go to activity, then favourites.
        Again, I wish you good luck, and I hope this helped you. 🙂

          vinaa replied 4 years, 7 months ago

          Thank you very much for the tip.☺☺☺

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nice

        wenteo replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Amazing!

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