vinaa posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 7 months ago

    Chapter 4
    Answers

    Linda looked at the dean on her pinkish , not-so-evil desk.The dean’s emerald eyes stare back at her.
    “So you’re saying you aren’t a never.Do you know who your mother is….do you know how much sin she has conducted ?Do you know anything about her ?”
    “Mmmmm”
    “She is…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nice chapter!

    vinaa posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 7 months ago

    Chapter 3
    A talk with the dean

    Catherine was distracted when someone wave a hand at her from the nerves seat . She then notice ita was Linda in a black saggy never uniform . Catherine then recalled what happen an hour before.Linda doesn’t belong there she thought.She had to do something but in aminute twinkle of anelm eye , someone handed over…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nice!

    vinaa posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 7 months ago

    Chapter 2
    Not a good time for Linda

    Catherine heard a loud thump and turn around to find many beautiful princesses like here . Suddenly , she felt someone pat her shoulder . She turn to find a girl her age waving at her .
    “Hey , my name is Elina . I’m from Gavaldon . Nice to meet you.”
    ” Never heard of…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Great chapter. Just before every comma or full-stop, you don’t need a space. But that doesn’t matter a whole lot, good job. 🙂

    vinaa posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 7 months ago

    Bio
    Name:Catherine
    Gender:female
    Appearance:tall,thin,has blonde hair,sweet face,rosythe cheeks
    Age:12
    Fingerglow:blue
    Characteristics:always in a good mood ,,has a craving for sweets
    Wears:blue gown(sometimes pink)
    Talent:speaks to animals
    School:Good
    Fairy tale lineage:Cinderella
    Status:daughter
    Eyes:sky blue
    Pet:Luscinda the cat
    Best…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nice start. The bio could have a bit more detail, and you need to put a space after every comma, full-stop, quotation mark, etc. Also, when you make a character speak, they get their own line. It makes it less confusing as to who the speaker is. Great job though. 🙂 Are you new here? If so:
        Welcome to RP level 0! Here on level 0 everyone writes…[Read more]

          vinaa replied 4 years, 7 months ago

          Thank you very much for the tip.☺☺☺

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Nice

        wenteo replied 4 years, 7 months ago

        Amazing!