why-wont-you-work-for-me posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 8 months, 1 week ago

    Oh hey, also, where is the 12th piece in the puzzle! I am going insane!

        kittencaravalsge replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        Bob the Alien stole it.

          why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          How dare he.

          lilystarling replied 7 months, 3 weeks ago

          Yes!!!!!!!!!!

        graceannemarie replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        Bad Bob.

          why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months ago

          give it back bob

    why-wont-you-work-for-me posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 8 months, 1 week ago

    I heard that book six was coming out in 2020, is that right?

        pinker13 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        It’s coming out on June 2, 2020.

          why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          okay, thank you so much! ur awsome!

    why-wont-you-work-for-me posted an update in the group Book 5: A CRYSTAL OF TIME 8 months, 1 week ago

    Okay, so. I dont get it. Did King Arthur ever know he had two more sons? And what about the thing Evelyn Sader put on his neck. Like, did he wake up and go, “What the heck? The heck is this thing.”

        iceangel replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        I don’t think he knew. I don’t really know how this worked(and I don’t particularly want to), but he’d groomed Tedros for the throne, and even if he was jealous and clingy, I don’t think he would knowingly do that to his son.

          why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Yeah, thats sort of what I thought to.

    why-wont-you-work-for-me posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 8 months, 2 weeks ago

    so heres mes story:

    The shadow apeared every day now, slipping through her dreams. It morphed, a cat, an owl, a bear. But most of all, it looked like Emmie.

    Shanon lost her best friend three years ago today. The Fire of the Village. Thats what the towns folk called it. Shanon figured out that being a heir to the throne wasent very fun without…[Read more]

        why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 2 weeks ago

        Thats just to begining, any idias?

        evilerruler845 replied 8 months, 2 weeks ago

        Lots of plot holes. You might actually want to explain what The Fire of the Village is… although the reader can guess what it means from the context provided. What is Shanon the heir to the throne of? I really like the beginning, though… it’s very intriguing.

          why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 2 weeks ago

          thx. sorry im not very good. i just started. How about this 4 a begining:

          The shadow appeared every day now, slipping through her dreams. It morphed, a cat, an owl, a bear. But most of all, it looked like Emmy.

          Shannon lost her best friend three years ago today. The Fire of the Village. Thats what the towns folk called it. The fire started by…[Read more]

          evilerruler845 replied 8 months, 2 weeks ago

          Better! However the last sentence leaves the reader hanging, and not in a good way… it’d help to explain everything through to where Shanon is now today (aka three years after the fire)

        why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 2 weeks ago

        hey so, can you check back in a few days im working on the middle… see you september 17th? Your rock! bye for now

          why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Chapter 1, Shannon

          The shadow appeared every day now, slipping through her dreams. It morphed, a cat, an owl, a bear. But most of all, it looked like Emmy.
          Shannon lost her best friend three years ago today. The Fire of the Village. That’s what the towns folk called it. The fire started by that HORRIBLE cockroach Even. That insufferable twerp…[Read more]