donutqueen11 posted an update 8 hours, 28 minutes ago

    @Thecoven4ever, @Prstncharlie, @Stargalaxy9000, @Thesgeturtle, @Darkfire2010, @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, @Queenagathaprofessersophie, @Pinkeleora08, @Boomboompancakes, @Pugsforever, @Annemarie2009 and @Raynaevil809.
    In the last day before my book is gone forever, I thought I’d indulge you guys with the first draft of the first chapter of ‘The Dar…[Read more]

    donutqueen11 posted an update 1 week, 1 day ago

    @Thecoven4ever, @Prstncharlie, @Stargalaxy9000, @Thesgeturtle, @Darkfire2010, @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, @Queenagathaprofessersophie, @Pinkeleora08, @Boomboompancakes, @Pugsforever, @Annemarie2009, @Raynaevil809.

    I don’t know how many of you actually have Wattpad, but I just wanted to let you guys know I’m taking ’The Purest Heart’ down on the…[Read more]

        thecoven4ever replied 1 week, 1 day ago

        I can’t wait for your book to hit shelves! See you on the other side lilith!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 week, 1 day ago

          Thank you for your support, @Thecoven4ever! It has meant the world to me. 😊

          thecoven4ever replied 1 week ago

          I’m so glad! <3

        donutqueen11 replied 1 week ago

        😊

    donutqueen11 posted an update 1 month ago

    Hi, I’ve been dabbling in rewriting a few scenes here and there, and I thought this one turned out quite nicely. If you haven’t read ’The Purest Heart’ please, for your own good, do not read this. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it! 😊

    @Thecoven4ever, @Prstncharlie, @Stargalaxy9000, @Thesgeturtle, @Darkfire2010, [Read more]

        donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

        Thank you, @Darkfire2010! I hope it makes it into future drafts. ❤️

        thecoven4ever replied 1 month ago

        I LOVE IT LILITH! I can really feel the tension, and it sets things up really well for Iohann’s dark side to cause trouble and the fact that grimhelde got away!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          Thank you, @Thecoven4ever! That’s exactly what I was going for. ❤️

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month ago

        I love Iohann’s internal conflict!!

        Grimehelde’s revenge story will be interesting.

        Might I suggest some things? Just minor things to set a tone and add to the conflict?

        This is very emotional and I love seeing how the characters react!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          Thank you, @Thesgeturtle! Of course you can provide feedback, that’s why I post things. 😂

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month ago

        Haha. Thanks!
        I was thinking: what if you got inside of the character’s heads a bit more? Specifically Iohanns.
        That way, you could intensify the emotions that are felt by the Duke.
        In addition, I sort of think the story was a bit rushed at the very beginning.
        Of course these are all’s stylistic choices. You don’t need to do any of that stuff…[Read more]

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          Thanks for the advice, @Thesgeturtle! I’ve slowed down the story considerably in my tenth draft, and I do plan on getting into the character’s heads more. Thank you! ❤️

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month ago

        Of course! I am glad that you were able to take my advice to heart!

        I know that it’s all a part of writing… but TENTH DRAFT? I’m too impatient to do that. 😓

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          I didn’t finish a few of the earlier ones, my first draft had a completely different storyline where Caranina succeeded, and each draft was only around 50,000 words. I’m aiming for twice that. Also, if someone can’t take constructive criticism, they shouldn’t be a writer. It was a skill which took me years to perfect, @Thesgeturtle. 😊

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month ago

        I believe that you can do it! 👍😀
        *😀*

        Makes sense. Constructive criticism plays a huge role in the growth of a writer.
        I still struggle with looking at constructive criticism positively sometimes 🙄
        Though I am always willing to critique someone else’s work 😅

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          Thanks, @Thesgeturtle! Don’t worry about it, as long as you work on it, it doesn’t matter where you started. Criticism is human nature, I wouldn’t worry. ❤️

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month ago

        Goodness. Are you this eloquent in person?

        Thanks for the reassurance! ❤️

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          😂 Take a guess, @Thesgeturtle. You’re welcome. ❤️

    donutqueen11 posted an update 1 month, 1 week ago

    @Thecoven4ever, @Prstncharlie, @Stargalaxy9000, @Thesgeturtle, @Darkfire2010, @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, @Queenagathaprofessersophie, @Pinkeleora08, @Boomboompancakes and @Pugsforever.

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        prstncharlie replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        I CAN’T WAIT TO READ HOW THEY SABOTAGE EACH OTHER HAHAHAHAHA!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          It’s great to know you’re on board, @Prstncharlie. 😊

        thecoven4ever replied 1 month ago

        THAT SOUNDS LIKE SUCH A GOOD IDEA LILITH! I can’t wait.

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          Thanks, @Thecoven4ever. It’s great to hear from you. 😊

        queenagathaprofessersophie replied 1 month ago

        It sounds great! I can’t wait for the sequel.

        donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

        Thanks, @Darkfire2010, I hope it’s as good as the first one! 😊

        donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago
        thesgeturtle replied 1 month ago

        Revenge, sabotage, and cooperation: three of my favorite elements in stories! I’m readddyyy!!

        (To use the vernacular: Sounds like TEA).

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month ago

          @Thesgeturtle, I’m glad you’re excited! 😂

    donutqueen11 posted an update 1 month, 3 weeks ago

    @Thecoven4ever, @Prstncharlie, @Stargalaxy9000, @Thesgeturtle, @Darkfire2010, @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, @Queenagathaprofessersophie, @Pinkeleora08.

    I finally remade my Spotify playlist! This playlist is what I listen to when writing my book, and it retells the plot through songs near and dear to my heart. I remade it because the playlist no…[Read more]

        thecoven4ever replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Oooh that’s really awesome! Also about the questions you sent me I’ve been working through answering them but I am locked out of my Wattpad account rn for some reason so when I finish is it ok if I just tag you on the site?

        donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Thanks, @Thecoven4ever! I really hope you enjoy the playlist. Of course you can, take your time and just tag me when you’re done. I look forward to your feedback. ❤️

    donutqueen11 posted an update 2 months ago
        catsforlife replied 2 months ago

        🙂

          donutqueen11 replied 2 months ago

          Your comment means a lot. Thank you, @Catsforlife. 😊

        thecoven4ever replied 2 months ago

        Lillith, I’m so grateful for your writing. The Purest Heart has always been shaping up to be a wonderful book, and I can’t wait until it hits shelves! I’ll be the first one to snag a copy 😉 Your journey has been so amazing to watch, I should be the one thanking you! Thank you, and good luck with everything.
        ~Cove <3 <3 <3

          donutqueen11 replied 2 months ago

          @Thecoven4ever, your words mean so much, and my journey would’ve been nothing without you to guide me and offer support. Thank you, and I can’t wait to see what you think of my book when it enters the world for real. 😊

          thecoven4ever replied 2 months ago

          Always, Lilith! I’m glad I could help <33

        thesgeturtle replied 2 months ago

        Wow! This is so exciting! Congratulations!!
        I’ll be on the look out for the book when it’s published! 🤗
        Thank you dearly for the mention. It genuinely makes me feel appreciated.
        I am always happy to support anyone who is a talented writer such as yourself!

        Best wishes on your journey! 🎉😀

          donutqueen11 replied 2 months ago

          Of course I included you @Thesgeturtle, you were one of my first regular readers! You’re so nice, and I hope you like how my book turned out. Thank you, and I hope to see you again soon. 😊

        uraza169 replied 2 months ago

        Lillith!!! Your story is amazing and I’m so happy for you!!!!!

          donutqueen11 replied 2 months ago

          Thank you, @Uraza169! 😊

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago

        @donutqueen11, indeed! See you soon😊

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago

          😊

        stargalaxy9000 replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago

        Ah! I am so happy for you! This is great! Congratulations!
        Just tell me when, and once it comes out I will storm the shelves. Seriously, it such a wonderful story, I will shamelessly buy them all. Lol
        But in all seriousness, we are all so proud of you. You have done such a magnificent job, I don’t think anyone could have done any better. ❤️

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago

          Thank you so much, @Stargalaxy9000! I couldn’t be happier knowing you know how much I appreciate you. You’ve always given me undying support and I cannot wait until you read my book when it’s published. Thank you so much! ❤️

          stargalaxy9000 replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago

          I can’t wait either! 😆 And no problem!

        donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago

        Thank you so much, @Darkfire2010. I’m so flattered you think I’m dedicated and inspirational, (😂), and I can’t wait until you get to read the polished version!

        boomboompancakes replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        OH MY GOSH YOUR WRITING’S GONNA BE PUBLISHED THAT IS AMAZINGBALLZTASTICAL AAAAAAHHHH
        *Berry slides over next to me, arms up and singing* “CEEEL-E-BRATE GOOD TIMES, COME ON!” *by this point she’s started happy-dancing*
        *i toss confetti upon you* WOOOO!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Well, I’m trying, @Boomboompancakes, nothing is guaranteed, but I’m glad I have your support, as always. So thank you, and I hope you like it when it’s finished. 😂

        why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Wow Lilith. Your words mean a lot right now. I hope that when the time is right, and you feel that spark of inspirational hope, you will send that pile of more than just paper to a publisher. You inspired me to write a story. It is only about 50 pages right now, and not very good, but it is mine. Your story will become the next thing to brighten…[Read more]

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Thank you so much, @Why-wont-you-work-for-me. Your words mean more than you could ever know. I have a feeling this draft will be the last, so hopefully I’ll be sending my book out to a publisher as soon as they reopen submissions. ❤

          You’re so kind to say my book holds enough potential to brighten up the world. It’s all I could’ve ever hoped,…[Read more]

        queenagathaprofessersophie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        I’m so proud of you!! I haven’t been on here in forever, but for some reason, I just decided to log on today and see what I’ve missed. I’m so glad I did because this is something I’m so happy to see! I will definitely remember your book so I can read it when it’s published, and I can’t wait to see you succeed as an author! Congratulations!!!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          I’m so pleased you logged on today, @Queenagathaprofessersophie! Thank you, and I hope you like my book when it’s finished. ❤️

        djgalaxybunny replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        I’ve just logged onto the site for the first time in a year. I was surprised to see a notification, then excited to see it was from someone I recognized! Congratulations on the book, and I’m happy you are going places with your writing!!

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

          Hi @Djgalaxybunny! Thanks, I’ll try and keep you posted. (I swear I responded to this already, sorry about that). 🤪

        pugsforever replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        <3 girl! i will never forget you! this site and the members have made me who i am!
        “it takes ten times as long to put yourself back together as it does to fall apart.” – finnick odair

        leaving absolutely broke me. 2 years later, i still haven’t recovered.
        but you guys are my family! more than my biological, who don’t understand my bond with y’all.…[Read more]

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          Aww, thanks @Pugsforever! I couldn’t forget you either, how could I? The people I met on here, past and present, have made me who I am. Even if most of them have gone onto better things. Leaving in 2018 shattered me, but I really needed that time to myself to put myself back together. My family doesn’t really understand either, but that’s okay,…[Read more]

        thesgeturtle replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        Oh darn. I should probably ask: where can we find this book? Amazon? I honestly haven’t been paying attention :/

        All of us are so glad you are back!!
        I actually think you were the first person to welcome me to the website…?

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          Oh, uhh, the book isn’t actually finished. I’m trying to get it traditionally published, @Thesgeturtle. Thank you, and I’m glad to be back! I think you might be correct, but I’m not sure. 😊

          thesgeturtle replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          @donutqueen11,

          Oh! Okay.
          That’s exciting!
          Just let us know when it’s printed and published so we can read it! 😉
          This is so exciting! Good for you.

        pugsforever replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        i will buy that book so fast i swear like ****** take all my money

          donutqueen11 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          Thank you for your enthusiasm, @Pugsforever! 😂

    donutqueen11 posted an update 2 months ago

    @Prstncharlie, @Pinkeleora08, @Darkfire2010, @Thecoven4ever and @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, since most of you don’t have Wattpad, I have created a Tik Tok account where I post writing related content, my username is 1Lilith_Green1. (I post mostly ‘The Purest Heart’ stuff). Thanks! 😊

        thecoven4ever replied 2 months ago

        Yay awesome! Unforutantely I don’t have tik tok though :(( But that’s still great!

          donutqueen11 replied 2 months ago

          That’s alright, @Thecoven4ever. I’m just trying to find a platform that suits everyone. 😊

    donutqueen11 posted an update 4 months, 1 week ago

    @Pinkeleora08, @Darkfire2010, @Thecoven4ever, and @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, I know it’s been a while, but I would just like to let you know that I’ll be taking my story, ‘The Purest Heart’ on Wattpad down soon, to see if I can get it published. If you would like to read it once it’s down, let me know, and I may be able to give you a read only…[Read more]

        thecoven4ever replied 4 months, 1 week ago

        Ahhh Good luck Lilith!!!! I hope you’re able to get it published. I’d love a read only copy if that’s possible, but if not I completely understand. ❤️❤️

        donutqueen11 replied 4 months ago

        I will make sure to continue to do that in future, @Darkfire2010. Of course you can! Please notify me of any mistakes, regardless of whether I’ve fixed them in my current draft. 😊

        donutqueen11 replied 4 months ago

        You’re welcome @Thecoven4ever! That’s so kind, let me know what you think of it. (Keeping in mind there were still a lot of plot holes). 😊

        why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 3 months ago

        Good luck! You rock! I cant wait to see your book on shelves! #rootingforyou

    donutqueen11 posted an update 6 months, 2 weeks ago

    @Prstncharlie, @Pinkeleora08, @Darkfire2010, @Thecoven4ever and @Why-wont-you-work-for-me, I have updated my first chapter on Wattpad, under the username @1Lilith_Green1 if you guys are interested in reading it again. 😊

        thecoven4ever replied 6 months, 2 weeks ago

        Awesome! I’ll check it out 😊

          donutqueen11 replied 6 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks, @Thecoven4ever; your support means a lot. ☺️

    donutqueen11 posted an update 7 months ago

    @Prstncharlie, @Pinkeleora08, @Uraza169, @Darkfire2010 and @Why-wont-you-work-for-me
    I cannot post my story on here, but as all of you have expressed interest, you can follow my writer’s Instagram: @The_Purest_Pen.
    Thanks! ❤️

        donutqueen11 replied 7 months ago

        That’s fine! ☺️

        why-wont-you-work-for-me replied 7 months ago

        same. sorry!

        donutqueen11 replied 7 months ago

        That’s alright. 😊