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Raven was a small, spry girl, with short black hair and black wings. She stared defiantly back at Iris and Ebony, narrowing her shockingly violet eyes, then breezed past them, nose in the air. Ebony and Iris raised their eyebrows at each other. This roommate was going to take some getting used to. They headed out of the room for class, both of them to late to see the twinkle of mischief in Raven’s eye.
Classes were wonderful and both girls had the best time they’d had in ages. At lunch, while Iris tucked into her pail of charred cows tongues, Ebony gazed across at the beautiful Evers, wondering if she would make it to leader and if so which would be her nemesis. Then one Ever caught her eye. The girl had dark hair, piercing blue eyes and thin limbs. That was perfectly normal. The thing that surprised Ebony was the fact that the girl was perched up a tree, a pink basket wobbling precariously on her lap. That’s strange, thought Ebony. I wonder what on earth she is doing eating her lunch up there. She took a closer look. At the bottom of the tree was a gaggle of wide-eyed Evers, thrusting pen and paper at the red-faced girl. She turned to the boy next to her. “Who’s that?” She queried. The boy glanced over at the girl. “Who’s that?” He gasped. “That’s only the daughter of the legendary Agatha and Tedros from The tale of Sophie and Agatha! Her name’s …………. and everyone wants her autograph and to be her friend!” “Wow!” Breathed Ebony. “That’s like the most famous tale in the entire Woods! No wonder those Evers want her autograph!” Iris finally stopped guzzling and looked up. “What is it?” She demanded. Ebony explained and Iris took the same view as her best friend. They both watched the girl as she scanned the Clearing frantically for an escape route. Suddenly, her eyes met Ebony’s and she mouthed”Help me!” Ebony and Iris nodded. “Anything to annoy those Evers,” remarked Iris. They looked around them for a diversion. Then Ebony spotted a murky pool of mud. They went over to it and grabbed gloopy handfuls. They took aim at a nearby group of Evergirls who were flouncing around in their pink pinafores.
Cool I love this Can’t wait for your next chapter. (Ps: Please read my chapters and bio ubder favorites at @fsa161)
OK thanks I will read your chapters by the way that was chapter 4 read chapters1-3 at @willowofravenswood . That was part one of this chapter and the girls name isn’t really .. ……… I just haven’t thought of a name yet.