wolfna23

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    wolfna23 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years ago

    Nick’s story chapter 9: a normal day
    After my walk I got my uniform on and read until I had to go to class. I was in history of heroism when I noticed that my hand looked like it does when I am in my wolf form. I just payed attention in class and acted like nothing happened. I walked outside with the rest of my class and got my lunch and found a place to sit.
    “Whats rong with you.” a voice said behind me, it was Linkion
    “Nothing, just tiered.” I answered
    “Where brothers, I know when you are ling.” he said
    “Its nothing, my hand just turned wolf in class.” I said,” Its not like I turned completely wolf in class.”
    “You shouldn’t take a walk late at night. Someone could have sean you.” He said
    “The same thing goes for you. At least I can control my transformation.” I yeld back
    “What ever,” he said to me before walking off. I was tired of my family telling me how to transform and what I should do. I did my best not to get angy at my brother during class. surviving fairy tales was a normal class and after the class I noticed that my uniform neaded a wash because it had duret and plants all over me. It felt nice that nothing strange happened today.

        caramelprincess replied 4 years ago

        Okay so here were some of the grammar mistakes you made (btw this is not to be rude or mean just to help you improve grammar wise)
        Wrong not rong.
        Tired instead of tiered
        Lying not ling
        Seen not sean
        Yelled not yeld
        Angry instead of angy
        Needed in place of neaded
        And dirt not duret
        Other than those few grammar mistakes the chapter was okay. Good job. 😉

        dot111 replied 4 years ago

        Cool chapter.

        luna101 replied 4 years ago

        Great chapter! Can’t wait for the next one!

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