wolfna23

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    wolfna23 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    Susans story chapter 11: Just another day
    As usual my teacher gave me top rank in beautification. During etiquette we where learning how to dance at a ball, I remembered how I would dance at the ***** that my parents would throw at our castle. All of the fancy dances that we learned where easy and I was able to help some of my class mates when they where struggling, my teacher gave me a first rank. During lunch I found Nick siting in the blue forest. I talked to him and he told me that he met the descendent of the evil queen. I was worried but I didn’t think much about it. I went to my next class and got pretty high ranks.

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Cool but I didn’t really see any plot in this chapter, plus it was pretty short and had some misuses of grammar. Other than that it was fine. 😉

          bridgetofwoodsbeyond replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Yeah what @caramelprincess said but besides that great job!

        dot111 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Nice job. It could be longer though.

        wenteo replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Nice! Use the advice above 😉

        oreliaotter replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Nice chapter!

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