My Ranking Points
Susans story chapter 11: Just another day
As usual my teacher gave me top rank in beautification. During etiquette we where learning how to dance at a ball, I remembered how I would dance at the ***** that my parents would throw at our castle. All of the fancy dances that we learned where easy and I was able to help some of my class mates when they where struggling, my teacher gave me a first rank. During lunch I found Nick siting in the blue forest. I talked to him and he told me that he met the descendent of the evil queen. I was worried but I didn’t think much about it. I went to my next class and got pretty high ranks.
Cool but I didn’t really see any plot in this chapter, plus it was pretty short and had some misuses of grammar. Other than that it was fine. 😉