This is the last part (Probably, I’m not sure) of this chapter. Hope you like it.
Chapter 2: The Different Treatings (Part 3)
I followed her to her office. She faced me.
“You will be sent to the School Master'” She said while eyeing my uniform.
“Why?” I instantly regretted my answer. Are you stupid?! He’s sending you to the School for Good! But,…[Read more]
This is the next part of the chapter. Sorry I didn’t continue it for a long time. Hope you like it.
Chapter 2: The Different Treatings (Part 2)
From then on, people started acting weirdly around me. They would look at me as if I was their savior, or bow at me and even sometimes kneel down in apology if they simply forgot to greet me. I would just…[Read more]
So this is Chapter 2 now. This is still in Yelena’s Pov and will ALWAYS be in Yelena’s Pov unless I tell if it’s Pov was from another character (Probably Sophie or the rest of the Nevers . Maybe the School Master himself). Hope you like it.
Chapter 2: The Different Treatings (Part 1)
I quietly followed the wolves holding Sophie like a pig into our…[Read more]
So here is the last part of Chapter 1. This is still Yelena’s Pov by the way. Sorry I forgot to put it in. Hope you like it.
Chapter 1: The School for Good and Evil (Part 3)
As I ran after Sophie, we ended up in a narrow bridge, the bridge between the two schools and saw Agatha come out of the water.
“Agatha!” Sophie shouted. Agatha saw her and…[Read more]
So here is the continuation. Hope you like it.
Chapter 1: The School for Good and Evil (Part 2)
I looked around. The school had a dark, evil aura. The kind that you would be sick even just breathing in the air. The school was spotted with blood and made of dark stones. In the columns, I could make out the words ‘NEVER’. The students were hideous,…[Read more]
There’s also a part three and that’s the final part of chapter 1 (Probably)
And also, if you are being confused about the parts of the chapter or you cannot find them, click @Yelena16 or click my icon or something like that
Is this fanfiction? You also might want to put who’s POV (Point of View) it is at the beginning of each part/chapter so the reader knows who’s narrating. Otherwise, nice job!!
So here is my chapter. Hope you like it.
Chapter 1: The School for Good and Evil
“Hey Yel! Let’s go! We need to be prepared for the School Master!”
I nodded and stared at myself in the mirror, the black hair going out. I’ve tried so many times to dye it but it goes black again the next morning. I just sighed and went with Sophie to Agatha’s…[Read more]
Nice Chapter! I like that you made your character friends with Sophie and Agatha. There were a few grammatical errors, but it was still great nonetheless. 🙂
here’s my bio anyway. hope you like it
Name: Yelena Crystal Lily Sophia Leigh Adina of Woods Beyond
Nickname: Yel, Lily, Lils, or Sophie but only Sophie calls her that. If anyone else called her a nickname, she would accept it, but they would regret it.
Age: She’s fourteen
Date of Birth: She’s born on 16th of September
:O ***! Yelena read my stories! I thought I was the daughter of Aurora… I found out though that I was daughter of the evil queen! IVE BEEN LOOKING FOR SIBLINGS!!!!!!!! PLEASE COMMENT AND READ MY STORIES!!!!!
i’m new, kinda. I like it
Welcome to RP Level 0! I’m @evilerruler845, so click my username to read my stories. We have different RP(roleplay) levels. RP Level 0 is a starting point for those who are new to RP. Level 0 and Level 1 are written individually (usually), but Level 1 has more detail in their stories. You could do RP collaborations, but those are collabs are n…[Read more]