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Hello! Sorry it took me so long to write this chapter, I was a bit all over the place with the structure and stuff, so I hope it’s alright. Enjoy!
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Chapter 8
~Enid~
The next two classes were even more boring than the first. In Beautification, Professor Anemone barked at us to smile wider, brighter, and in P…[Read more]
YOU SHALL TAG ME
oh you already did 😅
Still sleepy?
*site
It wouldn’t work on the sight (it kept making it italics grrr) but here is a doc I made:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-4T5Za9ROLynUhS75t-Urq0c6nXflZonIUHbAtwXPoM/edit?usp=sharing
So to break it up my username is: Yes It’s Anastasia, and I was struggling to come up with usernames when I made my account, so since my name is Anastasia, I was like, let’s do that shall we? I know I’m a bit weird. 😆
Sooo good!!! 😄😄😄😄😄😄
Hey! So, I’ve finally finished chapter seven, and I’m so sorry it took so long. I was failing to have any ideas for this chapter, but it’s all right now because I’ve finished it now. I hope you like it!
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Chapter 7
~Aleah~
I sat rigid on my bed, staring into space.
“What’s wrong with you?” Kas asked from across the ro…[Read more]
Tag me please!!!
Of course!
So good! I have no title suggestions ’cause I’m bad at that stuff, but how about Isabella?
Yes! I was thinking about showing the story from her point of view, but I was just contemplating how to do it. I’ll try that in the next chapter though!
I love it!
Could you do something with Zelda? Or maybe Calin. Idk. Also I really love how you left is with a question!
I meant to say, left US with a question
I Really like your writing and how you have defined each characters personality. I have read your current story and I’m just finding it so hard to give my characters a thorough, definitive personality. Tag me 🙂
So… I was really bored. I’m having a bit of writer’s block for my main story but I still really wanted to write something, and this was the result! I was a bit inspired by @gwen-elodie ‘s recent story (don’t know whether that’s done or not) but this is just a little thing I wrote. I hope you like it!
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Ivy punched J…[Read more]
Thank you for crediting me :), I really appreciate it because knowing myself I probably would’ve gotten mad at you for not doing it
Phew! So you’re not mad at me? I wrote it then realised it was similar to yours and thought I should credit you.
no i’m not mad at you at all. Actually I’ve been sorta procrastinating the next chapter of my story but seeing that you were inspired by me just made me really happy and motivated to continue writing. So I’ll credit you when I post it 😀
I really like the way that you started the story in the middle of a fight, it really sets the mood. Honestly, I’m really curious about their relationship, and what does Ivy say “Good luck trying to escape me now.” ???????? Sorry if this is to many questions, when I read something good, I’m full of them!
As she said, the chapter is sorta based on my story so if you like this dynamic, feel free to go into my activity and read it 😀
Hello! I’m really surprised that I finished this chapter so quickly. I really hope you like it!
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Chapter 6
~Enid~
That girl was a bit odd, I thought to myself, perched on the very edge of the pink bed. Isabella sat across from me, and another girl with short raven hair rummaging through a large pink s…[Read more]
the swictheroo makes things much more fun! Ii can’t wait for more!
Yeah, I thought so too. I’m writing chapter seven at the moment, so that should be up later today or tomorrow! 🙂
YAY!
Oh, my gosh! I love your fan fiction SO much! I cant wait for chapter 7! I love the way you wright with such descriptive words and all your characters! I really like Zelda and Aleah so far. Please tag me! (btw, I love the name Aleah!)
I can definitely tag you! And thank you so much! It makes me really happy that people are actually enjoying my story. I love the name Aleah too! 😀
I’ve finished chapter five! Here it is, hope you like it!
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Chapter 5
~Aleah~
The room smelt of smoke and decaying animal dung. I held my nose as I put on the musty sackcloth uniform with great reluctance. Kas had convinced me, but it was more me convincing myself, telling myself I was a good person, and that I…[Read more]
This is awesome! Zelda is my favorite character so far. You’re such a good writer!
Thank you!
Oh my goodness, thank you so much! Calin is getting a lot more spotlight in the next chapter, so I think you’ll like that one. Again, thank you! 🙂
Hello! I really hope you enjoy this chapter! I’m introducing a new point-of-view so that might be fun? (I posted her bio before, plus another one. If you didn’t read them you can always check my activity) Let me know what you think! 🙂
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Chapter 4
~Enid~
“Aren’t you coming?”
I turned sharply and saw the g…[Read more]
I like Zelda the best so far. And WHY DIDN’T YOU UPDATE SOONER??!! Yeah, I was really looking forward to this chapter. It was awesome!
Nice! Personally, even though she doesn’t have a POV, I like Isabella lol
@yesitsanastasia I love it, and lol my fave character is Isabella too!
Thank you guys! I love all those characters as well (although I like all my characters lol)
Hey! These are some bios for two more of my characters, one of which will be in my next chapter, which is being written. I hope you like them!
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b a s i c s.
name : Calin Hew
name meaning : powerful warrior
age : 15
date of birth : 29th June
zodiac : cancer
school : evil
room : Vice Tower 23…[Read more]
I love it!
nice!
Hello! I’ve got chapter three ready, hope you enjoy it! 🙂
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Chapter 3
~Enid~
When I awoke, I was lying in soft green grass. I had never seen this much green in my life. I sat up, looking around. Before me was a stunning crystal castle, towering high into the sky. I gasped. This is not the School for Evil… I loo…[Read more]
Ooh~nice twist. I don’t have a title suggestion because I’m terrible at naming stuff (sorry!)
Thank you! And that’s alright, I’m not good at naming stuff either, that’s why I was asking for title suggestions 😅
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Omg it’s like Freaky Friday!!!
Wow this was so unpredictable- I love it!
Hey! So I know I said that I was hoping to post this chapter some time later this week but I was really productive and finished it off! I present to you: Chapter 2!
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Chapter 2
~Aleah~
“I- what?” I cried, but with a stern glare from my mother, I quickly corrected myself. “Sorry, pardo…[Read more]
Can you tag me?
Sure I can!
Wow, this is great!
@ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I’m so sorry! I only wrote 27 s’s, not 28! 😅
I can’t wait for chapter 3!
That was great!
This chapter is slightly smaller than other ones but that is because I was really struggling to come up with ideas… I hope you like this chapter!
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Chapter 9
~Zelda~
I was alone in my room. I sniffed the lavender in my hand, pondering the lesson in Animal Communication. Although I appeared to the other students to h…[Read more]
Lovevit! Also its night for me too. It’s 9:13 where I am.
Loved it! ❤️ It’s 1:58 now.
Im very intrigued by Calin tho. I like his character- I hope he gets a P.O.V next time u write! Im trying to develop a charcater sort of like him
Ooh
coco, how’d u even find this, its like 7 months old oml