zitapink posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 3 months ago

    Ok I’m Goanna start my story now! 😀
    Chapter 1: Extormrnator
    A girl named Everest had climed an oak tree, becouse Jax had told her to keep a look out. But, instead, she had fallen asleep…
    As Everest slept she dreamed of the school for good and evil. About the tale of Sophie and Agatha. And how amazing it would be to attend a magical school,…[Read more]

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Hi! Nice start! A few points: please pay attention to your spelling, as those are very simple words you’ve misspelled, and please take notes of your paragraphs. Each paragraph must have one main idea – if there’s another main idea, like a new even happening, put it in the next paragraph dear. -Kas :>

          zitapink replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Ok I’ll keep mind thanks for the tips. I’m probably going to want to retry my first chapter later…

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Looking forward to how that will turn out! :>

        espilce replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Can’t wait to see what happens to Everest

    zitapink posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 3 months ago

    My 2nd charictor bio!
    Name: Colton (Colt)
    Age: 14
    Gender: male
    School: good
    Faerie take linage/ parents: grandson of Snow White and the huntsmen
    Fingure glow: silver
    Personality: immature, clown, annoying, *Everest opinion* like a little brother I never had, spastic, caring, sensitive once you get to know him, over protective and shy…[Read more]

        zitapink replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        When I said prancing I meant pranking… Sorry!

    zitapink posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 3 months ago

    My character bios:
    Name: Everest of Gavaldon
    Age: 14
    Gender: female
    School: good
    Faerie tale linage/ parents: mother and father were brutally murdered when she was 11 years old by a supernatural demon. her older brother raises her and her baby sister in the woods
    Fingure glow: pearl white
    Personality: independent, strong willed, knows how…[Read more]

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Unibabbit!!